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4 months ago
Commented

That was a great start. It would be nice if the character and Ino were a couple. If the character is a reincarnated person, would you write their perspective in the next section?

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5 months ago
Commented

This is how we're waiting for the new episode.

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6 months ago
Commented

A logical solution for this character to become stronger would be to visit Minato's old house somehow and have him find the jutsu scrolls, or create a story that has him meeting one of the legendary sannin. I really want you to continue your story, it's a lot of fun to read.

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6 months ago
Commented

If you don't add any of the harem nonsense and ridiculous systems that empower a ten-year-old to god-level power, it would be a fun book. Since the character doesn't have a clan, if you let him learn Hiraishin later when you're going to empower him, the story would be enjoyable. Don't be afraid to use time jumps to allow for logical character development. You've chosen a good theme, and I hope you continue writing.English is not my native language, I know it half-baked, I hope I explained it properly, I apologize if I used an incorrect translation.

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6 months ago
Posted

good start, I hope you continue the story.

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6 months ago
Posted

The character development and his strengthening over time is very good, I am addicted to the story, but there is only one thing I don't like in the story and that is the character not being in love. I think the character shouldn't act like he's gay, he should be in love with a girl.

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6 months ago
Replied to Bennett_6578

Did he respond? If so, could you ask him if he would like to continue?

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6 months ago
Posted

This story is perfect, please continue, it's so good that it's literally addictive, please continue

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6 months ago
Commented

Please come back. This story is so beautiful that I want it to be true.

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6 months ago
Commented

Please come back. This story is so beautiful that I want it to be true.