Plot
It was an extremely wasteful act.
Naruto: Uchiha’s Unserious Saga
Anime & Comics · TitoVillar
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Here's a smoother version with less repetition and a more natural flow:
Hollywood: Lights, Ink, Entertainment!
Movies · OrgoWriters
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[Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone] and [Chamber of Secrets] were films he was proud of.
Hollywood: Lights, Ink, Entertainment!
Movies · OrgoWriters
OC
Regal headed for the door, then paused. "For what it's worth…. I am glad it affected you, all of you. That means the story works."
Hollywood: Lights, Ink, Entertainment!
Movies · OrgoWriters
Written at Ch 73 First: Translation is good enough, not great. Second: The system is bad. He cannot get stronger w/ training. He has to kill to get stronger/get gold etc. The only good part is that when he recruits a crew member they get an unique equipment. Third: personal annoyance - He recruits Zoro & nami and they get 10 years to train before starting out. They others aren't even mentioned. That is going to make their power level all over the place.
"Nice to meet you, beautiful lady," he said smoothly. "I've heard the Sabaody Archipelago is full of hidden masters. Today's been quite the eye-opener, haha."
I Am Luffy: Partner System Online (One Piece)
Anime & Comics · Veltoria
Just mentioned the genocide of her island......
He had just been trying to find a good excuse to approach her, to show her he meant no harm. But who knew she'd start crying just like that? Women really were made of water, crying without warning or reason!
I Am Luffy: Partner System Online (One Piece)
Anime & Comics · Veltoria
Should have made his name into random words. He is too weak to know the blades name.
"My name… is Asura."
I Am Luffy: Partner System Online (One Piece)
Anime & Comics · Veltoria
It is not vague though. The system laid it out
The system's explanations had been getting vaguer ever since Luffy left the beginner stage. Whether that was on purpose or not, he wasn't sure.
I Am Luffy: Partner System Online (One Piece)
Anime & Comics · Veltoria
Legitimacy
"No, no, no!" The Taki-nin took a step back, frightened. He wouldn't dare offend the strongest ninja of his time.
Naruto: Uchiha’s Unserious Saga
Anime & Comics · TitoVillar