silver_Kashan

I liked your story, even though it was a mistake in translating it into saying that I want you to try something that will make an interesting story, as I make the reward of a system for evaluating Arkan the ability to set a mission, specifying its conditions and rewarding it according to its difficulty. At the same time, after the streamers obtain it, make it the ability to travel randomly across worlds after fulfilling the conditions of a system mission, where I make it an ability that has a period of time to reuse it, such as a month or a year. Make it move through anime like Damchi, Free Trail, and others, and even games like Genshin impact.🤔😏😏It will make the story legendary. 🤯🤯🔥🔥

A wonderful story, especially in its portrayal of Yuzuru's character. However, couldn't you have Yuzuru started by planning to marry off his children to broaden h is future-oriented thinking and prevent the character from being corrupted by making him seek more women? To demonstrate the depth of his forward-thinking vision 🤔😏

Note: When writing about the mixing of clan lineages, don't have Yuzuro marry or take on more daughters, lest his prestige fade and he appear obsessed with women. Instead, have him marry off his sons, especially since you need to consider age differences between the characters. This will make Yuzuro, after marrying off his sons, a man of foresight.