Thanks subharu.
I love this chapter.Its really good. i feel your story seemed more based on first person view. but it's very good how you describe the the friendship than the fight because of a green tea girl. Overall it is good. 👍 keep it up.
It's really great story although the pace is High but according to webnovel it is quite good.
It seems you won't let aryan take a break . first vicky guy and now terrorists. Aslo show some family time and how in silence cope with his feelings. well novel is running great. keep it up bro.
Sure I will do my best to write new chapters. Thebsame goes for you.
I think as both new writers we can help each other and improve together. there is need for you thank you . i helped you and than you helped me.
Well yes i am a girl . Now you can call me sister. 😄☺️
Hey brother I have re written the first chapter if you have the time can you check it out .
Thanks in advance Zoger . Hope you also get your recognition in your writing. best of luck ☺️
Sorry Subaru brother ☺️
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