I think its supossed to be like this i can check tho
None of them had asked him for anything yet. None of them had lied to him, as far as he could tell, not even about the hard things.
Fantasy · Zümbül
I really like the story so far and i love that you actually arent afraid of using curse words also really good chapter probally my fav
Thank you for the feedback I actually wanted to explain the reasons why it was allowed at 11 but because i started rushing the first few chapters i just skipped past this i will fix this too
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Fantasy · Zümbül
Really good so far put it in my collection waiting for more peak
Finally an actuall funny story cant wait for more like this
Really loved the ancient egypt theme. Amir was also really interestingy will put it in my library
yeah sure here is my dis: thegoatisjoseph
i will reach out to you
Thank you!! i will try my best to improve it
Thank you for the review! My favourite thing as a writer is really simple I can show people the world i had in my mind for years. i actually wanted it to be a manga but i really cant draw and i dont have enough money to afford artist.
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Fantasy · Zümbül