zakbrawn

I really enjoyed the atmosphere and the way the story slowly reveals its world. Alexander is an interesting protagonist, and his situation immediately creates a lot of questions about his identity and what awaits him. The power system is also interesting, especially the combination of Magic and Blessings. The story has a lot of potential, and I’m curious to see how everything develops as more secrets are revealed.

> "This story is absolute peak and your storytelling style is amazing! I literally created this account just so I could read this story written by my friend. I know how good it is, especially since it’s building towards an epic finale. This is pure peak!" >

It's a good story in a lot of ways, but it doesn't have many chapters, and sometimes the chapters are a bit too long. Overall though, it's pretty good."