Okay great start and Good writing quality but need to update more frequently. So far we have learned about the protagonist and he seems really interesting
I do love when when worldbuilding and narration done just right. Not too slow nor too fast. Maybe it could be a bit better to distinguish the system notifications from the narration but other than that i have no complaints
like werewolves ?
Beastfolk ruled the Southwestern Continent. They were renowned for their overwhelming physical strength, speed, keen senses, and unmatched hunting abilities.
Fantasy · Aether_Vale
Love to see a story set in the 1890s. The writing quality is great but you could be more descriptive and add some worldbuilding elements in story telling. So far, especially in the first chapters there are lots of dialogues , but a great and refreshing concept nonetheless
"He stayed outside your door all night, by the way."
Fantasy · Nyxara_Official
Good writing quality, interesting mutation system. Maybe a bit slow in the beginning but there's real potential to grow
hey yeah sure i will. check out mine too
The walking stick suddenly extended.
Fantasy · HeWhoKnows
Great introduction chapter
Hey. is this your new novel
The swordmaster journey
Fantasy · Yowaikaisen