wasted opportunity to provide a "Merchat of Death" Class. that wouldve been on point with his ability.
ch 33 Birth Of A Monster
Fantasy · Magecrafter
bruh you literally have a knight. if the character is stupid, that means the author is either writing a stupid character, or is stupid themselves. i dont hink the mc is supposed to be stupid so that means the author is stupid. stupid author get better jesus. another good concept ruined by a bad writer.
ch 27 Interrogation Investigation
Games · Haobo_Zhang
why wouldnt he just make dissection tools and dissect his enemies like a crazy anatomist like you build him to be. this is hilariously stupid.
ch 25 Water Transmutation- Magical Manifestations.
Fantasy · GREAT
paper ninjutsu is not kekkei genkai... its a hiden jutsu
ch 21 Ch21. Kiri 1
Anime & Comics · KasiCair
first of all, if they are easy to predict, why was the mc still a mega virgin in his past life. smh inconsistent
ch 12 Ch 12 : The boring daily life of Ray
Urban · Rysangel
I dont think its a good way of writing to, straight up, just say hes a cold blooded killer. It will look pretentious and cringe. Either show it properly and not in a half assed way or give a flash back when he is like that. Its just so cringe when someone tells himself he is a 'cold blooded killer'...
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Games · TheUnknownEntity
9 chapters in and its still just weak ass mc and suffering. i dont know how you will be able to make the progression seem natural when it seems like the story was just suffering for the sake of suffering.
ch 0 9 Dimensional Rifts
Urban · Pointbreak
i also would like a gamer residence pls
ch 0 1 Heaven Defying
Games · TitanicApex711
trash...................................
The Untouchable Son-In-Law: The Master Peregrine
Urban · Tang Heavens