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PandaKun: Mhm this is a decent start but looking at the comments I realize how normie most harry potter fans are.
Snape was a ****ty person who pined over someone he felt only he deserved.
Dumbledoor would need to be an idiot to leave the “savior” alone without double checking if he was getting the proper treatment.
I can talk more about it should anyone reply asking about characters or arguments to my logicHarry and Philip Potter · C2
Harry and Philip Potter · C2
ApocalypseX: Very good story so far bro! Just keep going!
Apocalypse genre is far more interesting than the others, in my point of view lol
TromJH2424: Hey guys, author here. Yes, I am shamelessly giving myself full stars.
This novel is about how Natasha has lived 10 years in the apocalypse, dies, and returns back 1 year before it all started.
This is going to mostly be a base building novel with a building system where she builds up a fortress, collects resources, levels up, and occasionally fights.
First couple chapters(8-15 chapters) are going to be before the apocalypse startsApocalypse Fortress
Conquer Your Own Fate · C0
PandaKun: Just so that you know Remus, and Black would have never seen Potter before with exception to when Harry was less than a year old.
Harry potter would also never have met Remus, or Black until this or last Chapter... A bit weird that they greeted each other like they knew each other.Reborn As Harry Potter · C26
Reborn As Harry Potter · C26
PandaKun: All I can say from the top of my head is the plot advances so much slower after MC gets injured in the tower and then immediately afterward it goes into adding more girls, and sleeping with girls, and girls wanting to know more about your MC.
The thing I really wanted from your book was a story about advancing the storyline to match what you imagined could happen. Not "There are a lot of pretty women here lets seduce them all by existing". The harem plot armour is weak and typical harem stories always make the women into 2D cardboard cut outs.
The characters were more interesting when they weren't all falling head ovet heels for the MC. And the MC became so unoriginal from the super good start that I literally forgot his name despite trying to reread the story like 4 days ago.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
PandaKun: I have not read up to date with this story so take this with a grain of salt.
the book is good for about a hundred chapters. Then it devolves into a fan service cesspool of harem s*x based plot. "He is do dreamy, I wanna **** him" "you guys were talking about *** know I wanna have ***"
It's a good story, but if you want to read it for the story you will be sorely disappointed with how much filler each chapter has.
character development is a true sin because it made all the important people into 3D personalities until the book became so popular that he could fill it with fan service.
Because of it being a fan-fiction i recommend reading the original first. I feel like it is not worth the time spent reading to catch up.
I do not recommend this book but perhaps he fixed his fan service later on the story.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
PandaKun: Honestly, this is probably my favorite story on Webnovel right now.
The updates are frequent enough to still be fresh in your mind but the waits seem to take forever.
The Author knows his Marvel lore extremely well.
The characters seem well done (perhaps a bit of reliance from the official Marvel movies/books but since it is a fan fiction it's to be expected).
All in all would heavily recommend even if you're just a normie Marvel watcherSpiderman Ultimate Peter Parker
Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker
PoorReader: Why does it have to be so good that it’s painful waiting for the next chapterSpiderman Ultimate Peter Parker · C13
MMORPG: Rebirth of the Legendary Guardian
Supreme Emperor System · C0
MrEasy: And the needle passes through easily because, it does not harm the user!Supreme Emperor System · C28
Supreme Emperor System · C27
Red_Tempest: Thank you for the review and the tips. Can you specify what you were referring to by vicious response to nonsensical action? I just want to improve in the future.Supreme Emperor System
PandaKun: Its a story I would recommend, but not strongly. It has potential and will certainly be well recieved by the LitRPG groups but its pretty basic. Sure I haven't read anything identical and its an intriguing idea but it isn't fast enough to make one hooked.
I read the 15 chapters and I loved it but when the updates are like they are(1 chapter everyday or two) its simply hard to hold the same interest as a large chapter everyday. I'm not saying that its a bad pace especially since I have experience writing and I know how hard it is to keep writing while life is going on.
The character developement is a tad bland but this isnt a professional book. It seems like the MC was adapting way to quickly and accepting a crazy thing like it was an everyday occurrence. He acted vicious in one chapter to someone who did something nonsensical to the MC but it wasn't that made sense.
The world is made to be similar to the real world and even recently(chapter 22 for me) included a real event with some large company but it seemed slightly exaggerated. Not that it is negative to point out.
Overall I hope it gets more popular and gets some better pointers and the Author improves the story. Good Luck! I'll be in the shadows lurking like always!Supreme Emperor System
Supreme Emperor System
PandaKun: This book seems very cliche at the beginning but I will beg you to keep going. It started changing from a generic novel around chapter 20 and from then on it was extremely unique. I would recommend this novel to anyone.
I hope you enjoy it too!Shift! The Side-Character Heroine
Release That Witch · C802
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