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I'm currently on chapter 202 and even though the novel has already passed 1000, this review will mainly be my opinion on whether it's worth reading this novel or not, so 200 chapters should be more than enough. So far I'm enjoying reading it, it's no masterpiece, but it's a decently cultivated novel without the most annoying problems that this type of novel usually has. If you like online cultivation and are looking for something like that, this novel is a slightly worse alternative but still good and interesting. Now, despite being a story worth reading, this novel has some very frustrating problems and that's why I'm giving it 3.4 stars and these problems remain the same from chapter 1 to where I am currently (202). The first of these problems is that the MC is a bit stupid. Not much, but he has a general attitude that frequently reminds the reader that this MC is certainly a little less intelligent than the average. The second problem is the interaction and development of characters, which is practically non-existent. Several characters were introduced, but none have much presence or development, even important characters such as the MC's family, mentors and friends are poorly developed, none of them seem alive, they are all clearly characters in the protagonist's story. Even the protagonist doesn't have much personality or is well developed. The third problem is the World Background, even worse than the character development. The author basically created a generic farming world, made one or two bad attempts at setting the scene, and left it at that. These three problems are really big and guarantee that this novel will never be anything more than average, but average novels can still be good reads and I recommend this one for Cultivation Online readers.

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The elders and city lord duo were watching something extraordinary unfold in front of their eyes. Alex was too shocked and forgot to answer for a second.

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

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Ugh, this is so stupid I don't know what to say

"Here is my suggestion. Since both of you want this disciple so much, why don't you both accept him as your disciple? This way you can both teach him, and he can be part of both of your sects." he said to the two sect leaders.

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Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

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I really hope it's not something ridiculous like joining the two sects

"I don't think the young man can choose if both of you offer him something so good. So, I might have a solution to your problems, Sect leaders."

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Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

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ch 76 Chapter 76:  Breakthrough II: Star Forging!

Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!

Reincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!

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