Suenda

29d

Posted

Its a great original story that is set in a western fantasy, the only one flaw that has been nagging me about it that has led me to write this review is; Author please use different phrasing rather then although this may have taken a long time to explain, it only happened in an instant. I understand its to meet the word count or something but as someone that is listening to the audio, hearing that after a lengthy fight explanation just triggers something that most people would of just read over to the next part. That's the only flaw about the story that has triggered me after all its used a bit too many times; but love the content and will continue to see how this will all progress in the future =)

I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Eastern · Fu Xiaochen

Suenda

2yr

Commented

Is there gonna be constant chapters for this month? Just asking in case since last time I purchased premium chapters nothing came out for the next few months.

ch 776 A State of Instability, A Familiar Face

Realm of Myths and Legends

Games · DaoistZenFeng

Suenda

2yr

Commented

just a question of interest from the last chapter till now there is something very apparently. Is the city Alex lives in some sort of space colony or different dimensions that are specialised in urban and rural development as glacors and volcano's are apparently non existant in their city's knowledge or the fact after to forest they walk off into the void that sounds like space where as in game its into the boundless ocean. or the face they are looking for a god since the dimension was separated by unspeakable powers but nether the less curious

ch 187 Fifth

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

Suenda

3yr

Commented

Can I enquire how it jumped from light teasing after a serious situation to 3 years later at graduation? It was just getting into the climax of a potentiallyinteresting plot of a meeting between two cultivators and a backstory to how he resolved everything gaining back his normal school life. I haven't finished the chapter before making this comment so I'm not too sure what's the ending is but, I feel this is rather abrupt and there seems to be 10s of chapters prior I've missed or something. If this is how the novel is, I'll accept it. But if possible could you add in filler chapters into volume 1 if you have time.

ch 43 Last Day.

The Legendary F Rank

Fantasy · Zero_Things

Suenda

3yr

Posted

The book is rather good, it immerses readers into a happy go lucky character that is trying to survive in Shanghai society from a different perspective with a system of course. It also plunges into the dark side rather quickly stiring up some unpleasant feeling that is very well depicted of the darker side of society.