hmm seem cheap for regen passive.
should have put 3.7 million
Looking at the 3,700,000 million reputation points in his inventory, Lin Ye's smile widened.
Sci-fi · The Sky Wishes to Clear Up
says invincible sure its meant as invisible
However, things were now different from before. No one came looking for Moss, and he was treated like an invincible person.
Eastern · Infinite Evolution
that's a big baby! wonder if this is a mistype?
"It's a little princess. She weighs about 17 pounds and is very healthy."
Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires
yeas he did he mentioned 6 being +5 but there is seven 15s total
(Author's Note: 15+15+15+15+15+15+15+6+3 = 99. The remaining one is temporarily kept.)
Eastern · White Foxes Are Not White
it cuts off in the middle of the sentence a bunch of what?
On this day, Wu Ning had just left the previous tribe and continued to wander around. After walking for a few days, he encountered a tribe. It seemed that this tribe was a large tribe, bigger than all the other tribes he had encountered before. Wu Ning quickened his pace and walked over. In Wu Ning's eyes, these were not tribes, but merely a bunch of .
Fantasy · Black Oil
I think this is a saying not sure "I did something bad to you yet you still help me" that's what I'm guessing the author meant
'I sold you, and you are still counting money for me.'
Fantasy · Blood of Sinners
fear, despair, and horror would be better here
Fear, fear, horror... all kinds of complicated emotions appeared in their minds.
Fantasy · Wanted Money
author should have just said the system suppressed his emotion over his death rather than say he has no emotions at this point.
Slowly, fear started creeping upon him. 'Uhh… system. As Energy, I don't have my own body, I assume?'
Eastern · Snoring_Panda
basically same description of a cultivator lol
A powerful mage could easily cross mountains and seas, fly in the air, and travel great distances in an instant.
Fantasy · Langya Sandi
only thing different from the other sign in novels i read so far
Jiang Chen was considered a drudge even amongst the labor disciples. He didn't know how to pull strings or give money. Most importantly, he had even offended inner sect Senior Sister Chen!
Eastern · Fire in the Sun
you mentioned blake as black multiple times
As a Super Tyrannosaurus rex, black needed a lot of energy and fresh water every day.
Sci-fi · Lang Ya Xiao Di
similar to a saiyin?
The stronger he fought, the stronger he became!
Eastern · Langya Shu
logical in this situation especially because of people characters not sure when a person you help quickly turns around when the situation is reversed. help yourself before others
"I'm not a hero… even if I help a few people, I will end up overexposing myself since the monsters are clearly heading toward where humans are," Ryan said. "Walking in a big group isn't safe in this kind of situation… it is a pity, but I can't, nor do I want to risk my life for strangers."
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
author could put parentheses after what is said regularly so those who have trouble can understand extra work but no controversies
"Ah nothing much fer it wi oor sorry states. Jist hiv tae get 'em hame fer the noo. It's no like we can take the queen either wi the way that one could handle us." He replied jabbing a finger at the boss. "Durz, yi shuld get tae skinnin' 'em. The lad here will help me get back."
Fantasy · Antihero
this need reworked
[ "Sir, Let me show me take you to the room." ]
Parallel Memory
Fantasy · SomDxD