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Honestly, the storyline if this book I love. I love the characters and the plot, even if they ain't that good, but the grammar and punctuation of refering to everyone, man and woman "he" (with the quotation marks in the book every single time) as they are of a certain level of strength you stop giving them genders, and never use the word him? It's excruciating to read

No thanks. The whole needing a master thing? No thanks.the retarded flaw? Even more no thanks. The FML? What the fuck did I just waste my life reading, complete waste of time imo, I was so fucking excited for the book during the first nightmare, but literally every chapter after to 210 when I dropped it was a straight downhill slope that I wish I jumped off sooner.

Disappointed to the max, dense spineless MC who just does everything every random woman tells him to do purely because he can't deal with women, it would be one thing if he was dating them or sleeping with them, but they're his customers, how can you give away 50 bottles of magic wine with 1 glare of a customer you like. Also the man gives away the first electric generator in the world away for 5k???????? Man sold a bottle of wine for 5k and he thinks the bottle of wine and the generator are equal? Huh? If you lost 99.9% of your braincells while traveling to the other world I could understand this MC, but that's about it.

Sorry didn't get a notification on this, theres literally a timeskip out of nowhere where he is out of the timeline and his friends go through a shit life while he's gone, done just dissapear or die, or now all the test want to kill him out of nowhere.

Sis:dead Mom: probably dead(nobody saw body) Friends:dead or villains now For a book with 300 chapters I'd expect the main character to win at least once

Don't normally give this high a review but when you binge a thousand chapters in less than a week and are sad there ain't more you know they did something right. There's nothing by itself that drew me in, but there wasn't a single thing I disliked.

Literally read the first 20 chapters 4 times changing the enemy names, and you have the first 80. This is complete trash so far, would not recommend to anyone

thank ggod have an app so I don't have to see his replies harassing me to remove kekw

lul I love when the grammar nazzi comes out when autocorrect changes names, you realise this website is an app, right..... apps are on phones with autocorrect. also why would I go to the effort of trying to explain what put me off, when you've been nothing but a condescending prick? I wouldn't want to help you improve now even if I could considering how much of an ass you've been, literally lying repeatedly about me, and talking ****. treat others better if you want to be treated better, anyway, ima set this book so I don't receive notifications of replies(third party app), it's pretty clear your just getting more and more tilted as this goes on, considering your throwing out words like harassment, when you've sent literally the same amount of messages and yours have been more hostile, if anything your harassing me, I dunno if your just trying to bully me into deleting it or what, and I just don't want to deal with it anymore. I have nothing against you as a person, sure I wouldn't count you as nice, but nobody is perfect(some just closer than others). hope you have a nice day/night/rest of life, and hope I never see you again 👍

ofc I have subscribed to the patron of good books, and as I said, might want to Google definition of harassment, cause you've said repeatedly that you weren't offended by my comments. so unless you feel intimidated, if your using it like this you're clearly not aware of the definition

again, like I said in my comment, might want to Google the definition of harassment

oh I forgot to add, he meets new peolle who are inserted into the book, and immediately tells them his secrets, and if that ain't bad enough the book goes from MC against the world, who kills people who call him fatty, to the doorstop of the group, who's abused and taken advantage of. it's legit like at the beginning of the city ark a new author who read a synopsis of the previous work took over and was like, let's take this in the fucking shonen slice of life direction

chapter 153 fucking ruined the book for me, the whole city arc so far has been dog**** compared to the rest, but when he gave 40% of his company to a guy for renting his fucking field for growing crops for the food, and another 40% to his friends, while only keepping 20? I'm fucking done. if your **** at business, just don't fucking add numbers, literally just gloss over this ****, if this is the MC I'm not reading this book, imagine tanking a book in 20 chapters, MC is literally a doormat who doesn't make decisions himself, he never tries to get any favourable conditions, he literally volunteers to get shafted in every fucking deal, and gives away so much ****

btw i read the first 14 chapters of your book, and i wouldn't change 3/5 of the review criteria at all, sleeping/grammar was better than I expected from the MSG's I read from you, but the story? boring. the MC? dislikeable, Minami and Lian li? hard pass. the world? uninteresting with no hooks. the book didn't even have comedic value to fall back on. the original goal I had when I started was to reach chap 20 but I couldn't even get that far.i suppose if your only requirement in a book is yandare youll be satisfied, but I have higher standards than that. anyway ik your gonna be butthurt about this too like always, but try not to lie this time, k. glhf

and also about the "especially when you don't do anything to support them" thing is bs, the fact that I started using webnovel pretty much the day it came out, along with others, is the reason they wanted to take over more of the industry, me just being on the site, and making it grow, inviting my friends who have never read web novels to sign up and try it indirectly effects you, so stop *****ing I don't like your garbage yandare and get over yourself

bro, this is kinda sad when you lie.... again..... I've never once harassed an author, maybe you just need to Google the definition bro. I've also not done this to a single author before, I said i plan to in the future, key word..... future. it's kinda sad how you keep making **** up and then talking about how I'm mad........ like for real, if you just want someone to talk to, I'd be happy to talk about a subject of your choosing, but if you keep lying im just gonna stop replying

you bring up if trying to say it's like a multiple choice thing, and then bring up programming probably not knowing that an if in programming is called an if STATEMENT.... you see the word statement? if you put if in and then a lie doesn't change the fact that your statement is a lie bro.... this is kinda sad how invested you are in this bro. you ok? if you just want someone to talk to I'm here for you but if not..... wanna not be so mad? it's quite unbecoming.