Blackwater - Profile

it's starts pretty good overall the first few chapters are pretty upbeat, and the development is nicely paced and gives time for the characters to develop a bit. Sadly, after the time skip, it goes just downhill. The character changes from a calm and collected character to a cold shifty one. It kinda takes all the fun out of the story and doesn't make much sense to me as even the plot gets darker with little to no world building in that direction. The story overall is not bad, but I didn't enjoy it in the later half.

it's OK, I guess. The DxD arc while pretty rushed was fine overall, the story kinda lost me somewhere in the middle of the Tensura Arc, I just didn't enjoy how the world building was handled, the Dimensions mumbo jumbo, and the Time spans that were used. At some point, there was less fun stuff for me and more meh plot points on a list with more Higher Dimensions Bs mixed into it. That doesn't mean it was bad or anything, but I personally enjoyed it far less.

It's pretty ok so far . Not that big of a fan how the story develops or the Charters tho. Percy feels like he is even more a playball of the Gods than the first Time around, with Nyx and Chaos messing with him whenever they want for there amusement. For someone who Traveled back in Time after fighting in multiple wars he also feels weaker than he should, mostly because the Gods / Primordial use him a entertainment of sorts. The story is not bad but i honestly expect a more free and Badass MC

Writing is good, structure is also fine, pace is pretty slow but ok. I'm not that happy with the story development or the character designs because they barely differ from the Originals with the MC being a bit different and extra Drama added. So overall it's just a more Drama filled and depressing version of the Original that already wasn't a very Happy story to begin with if your read all the Volumes. With the whole NTR tag thing I'm split, i get that it's not technically NTR because the MC wasn't physical with her but in gernal most considered NTR if the love interest of an MC gets stolen in any way shape or Form and therefore the Drama and why people aren't happy. I find the whole Arc is Overdramatic just for Dramas sake.

The first few chapters are pretty funny but later it's gets more and more disjointed and is just plain crack with no plot. And with no plot it's hard calling it a story. But overall ok for what it is

Technically the story is solid, writing and basic world building is ok, just the Character Designs are a bit strange and very AU at Times. Not really a fan of the MC Character Design, there is a difference of being Dark and just being a wanker and at times the MC dips very strongly in the wanker category. So far he mainly comes of as self entitled, ungrateful and sometimes just plain arrogant with no reason to be. Otherwise the progression of the story is ok, but the MC is just not for me because his many personal flaws kinda put me off