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Keep up the good work ! You already know what I think of your work since I had the privilege of reading the first few chapters in advance !

Everything is going too fast, maybe it's going to be better in the following chapters but I can't immerse myself in the story due to many grammar and vocabulary mistakes. English isn't my first language either so I can understand that is not easy but still, it's too much mistakes for me... As i was saying, everuthing is going too fast, many things happen without any explication... but well i'm only at chapter 27 so who knows. The story is interesting and I hope the author continue with his good ideas. If you don't mind the numerous mistakes and fast pace novel then i suggest you give this novel a try.