thanks for the hard work.
ch 793 Chapter 792: Kung Pao Chicken and Mapo Tofu (End)
Movies · inferno303
thx for the chapter. u improve at fast pace (=
ch 20 Getting advice and national team?!
Others · burakku
thx for the chapter. i think its gettin better with each chapter. but its a little to mechanical. i hope for more interactions with other players and coaching staffs. show what and how he tries to improve . maybe get him a mentor like person (his grandfather for example)overall some character development.i wouldnt recommend harem as its not some fantasy novel and its a lot harder to develop the caracters evenly without some of them getting lost in the story with nothing of substance to carry the storyline. better get him a supporting partner to rise alongside him. of course im no expert so take it with a grain of salt and just try to keep it up and improve along the way.[img=recommend]
ch 19 Winning the Bundesliga title
Others · burakku
thx for the chapter. he got in because kimmich got a red card but right after u wrote his first pass was to kimmich
ch 18 Getting called up to the first team
Others · burakku
thx for the chapter. i love kingdom building so please dont rush through it (=
ch 11 Lost the bet?*
Anime & Comics · WeedSmokah
sounds good so far (=
ch 0 8 Enemies Shocked, Victor Rocked!!*
Anime & Comics · WeedSmokah
thx for the chapter. feel the thunder (=
ch 146 Chapter 146: Charity Concert (3)
TV · Alittlepiggy33
thx for the chapter
ch 142 Chapter 141: Who is the Monster?
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
thx for the chapter (=
ch 20 Chapter 20 – He who makes the rules…
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter
ch 18 Chapter 18 - Fire
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter
ch 17 Chapter 17 - Firsts
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter(=
ch 16 Chapter 16 – Two steps forward
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chap. i would like luna,she is smart ,thinks different and has a mystery aspect about her that could do well with the system.and she loves animals! in the end its up to you and im sure it will be good and interesting (= some1 unexpected would be nice too
ch 15 Chapter 15 – Dungeons, Dragons and Dances
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter
ch 14 Chapter 14 – Trips, Training and Tango
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter (=
ch 13 Chapter 13 – Reflections, Requirements and Research
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter (=
ch 12 Chapter 12 – Professor Potter and Presents
Book&Literature · burnable
nice chapter ! i rly wonder how u will develop this further with dumbledor in the mix ,harrys progress should skyrocket even further. will there be systematic divination? like readings of tarot cards after waking up like a daily weather report? 20° ,rainy, mortal danger, =D thx for the chap
ch 11 Chapter 11 – Tricks, traps and hidden passageways
Book&Literature · burnable
thx for the chapter, would love some more crossovers (greys anatomy cough) keep it up (=
ch 52 Ch.52
Reincarnated into Modern Family
TV · Anomander_Adaar