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Fix the the POV, stick to 1st person POV.

The author's neighbors should be notified by this fanfic, just to be safe. So that they know what to look out for.

Can Mai construct gold for the clan? More wealth for the clan is good right?

Thank you for the chapter. ❤️

Captain America and Johnny Storm will look alike then?

I was expecting him to have ant-king level nen, and nen techniques plus fighting experience. Meh. And at least burn that hand so that it can't be re attached.😑

Isn't "incarnate" more accurate term to use than "transmigrate" with their situation?

Yay! You're back!❤️

Faster than the speed of light? They might as well go back in time with that kind of speed.

He doesn't feel like from the red priest pathway... Just my opinion. The red priest pathway is the manifestation of divine masculinity of the The Original Creator. His personality feels more compatible with the Darkness pathway, with all his emo monologue. Anyway, thanks for the chapter 😁

He should destroy heven while the other realms are watching to show that he can prune their realm off the world tree if he wants to.

Yes, like take all the money from the bank accounts of dead people and abandoned accounts. And also can't he order the AI to hack the league to make a trainer ID?

Why not directly study dragon blood? I think The Hand have dragon blood and also there's a dragon in Ta Lo.

Blood sample from this?

Thank you for the chapter.🐉🐲🐉

The punctuation marks are kinda jarring. It feels like he's shouting in a normal conversation, it's irritating. Still, thank you for the chapter.❤️

Thank you for the chapter.🐉🐉🐉

It would have been nice if you kept the story and characters canon before the MC arrives and let the story flow from there. Also the "vampire soulmate" thing is kinda off putting. Now it feels like the story is an amalgam of other fanfictions. Still thank you for the chapter.❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for the chapter🐉🦠🧠