JonX2188

JonX2188

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JonX2188
JonX2188
1 days ago
Commented

Keep going we got your back and our power stones lol

JonX2188
JonX2188
JonX2188
9 days ago
Posted

It's really well done, I started reading it with a little apprehension and now I can only say I need more chapters lol. Loved that the beginning horror was the shining and the interaction with the hotel. Also love how it seems batman is going to become fear itself

JonX2188
JonX2188
23 days ago
Commented

+1

B) Create another story with sport aspect in modern family

Reborn as Leonard hofstader but in a world of bbt and modern family?

Reborn as Leonard hofstader but in a world of bbt and modern family?

TV · Mad_LORD

JonX2188
JonX2188
27 days ago
Replied to The_KotU

Superboy prime is near immune to magic as well, because the dimension that he was originally from did not have magic so it's not really a dumb answer

"No," she said. "Your powers are entirely your own and entirely physical in their nature, even when they seem to operate outside normal physical parameters. Your—" a slight pause, searching for accurate phrasing "—outer world origin means your physiology operates on a different substrate than this universe's native physical laws. Magic, which is the manipulation of this universe's fundamental energies, finds nothing to grip in you. You are, in practical terms, almost entirely immune to magical influence."

Marvel's New Superman

Marvel's New Superman

Anime & Comics · Mythbeastsstudio

JonX2188
JonX2188
27 days ago
Replied to TwinHeart

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"I always wondered—how a small-time, low-ranking ninja dared to publicly chase after Senju Tsunade. Turns out you had a patron."

Naruto: From Scratch With a Template System

Naruto: From Scratch With a Template System

Anime & Comics · Arthorain

JonX2188
JonX2188
27 days ago
Replied to DaoistxgJLk2

Not true, it clearly states "the user can only control things that have been previously touched." it doesn't say with his hands, I guess that's also a limit Shiki had after he lost his legs

He could control everything connected to the earth.

Naruto: From Scratch With a Template System

Naruto: From Scratch With a Template System

Anime & Comics · Arthorain

JonX2188
JonX2188
27 days ago
Posted

I really like it, its one of the better TWD stories I have read, he is not OP and the system is consistent, the interactions betwen the characters are also good and the story is taking a good direction, can't wait for more chapters.

JonX2188
JonX2188
1 months ago
Posted

I am not against using AI to write but when you don't even proof read you get this types of error, having the same chapter repeated, earlier chapters referencing outcomes shown in later chapters like if they had already occurred. Other than that your character design needs a lot of work he is too machine like and is not explained how the system is helping him, you could have done it without the system and still get the same result

JonX2188
JonX2188
2 months ago
Commented

I can totally picture him saying this lol

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"Leo! What a nice name! It even rhymes with noodles! Hahaha...." Mr. Ping softly chuckled at his own joke.

Mark of the Multiversal Pretender

Mark of the Multiversal Pretender

Movies · SlimeSage