So CRINGE! yuck....
He turned around again, facing the direction they had disappeared in. He had closed his fist around the card before in his anger, and now, as he opened it, he saw that it had been crumpled. Smoothing it out carefully, he put it in his pocket and looked up before saying, "I won't forget this. She may be a princess now… but when I reach the peak, there will be many like her who will beg to speak with me. I'll prove it to you. One day, you'll regret that you spoke to me in this manner. I swear it!"
Fantasy · KillerHemboy
Though it's great and fresh to see interactions with the intelligent Pokemon learnt their ways and culture as you go, maybe it's time to have some 'human' in the scene? I'd like to see what can be done when our mc and them. Oh and different pokemon that dwell in ecosystem would be interesting too, how it goes in the dessert, tundras, human villages, urban area, etc etc. That'd fantastic to write.
ch 37 Update.
Video Games · TheQuibbler20
That one last line killed any hope I've for this Novel. Thanks to that now I'm seeing him as a mentally handicapped and unstable 18-y.o with incoherent speech.
ch 20 Decision
World's No.1 Villain
Fantasy · KillerHemboy