I don't know what to say.The novel has gone from 3-4 stars to 0 in this very chapter.The MC goes against his very ideal and everything. The biggest one is he doesn't want to rule and now he is ruling a country and decide to be a stupid villain to unite Earth instead of replacing every government leaders with his own men and form a true united nation or force them to join with force or whatever with his power.Why take a hard path when you have an easier path and complain that you are lazy to do it?
ch 124 I am Uchiha Madara
Video Games · thelightedghost
The mc is being a hypocrite. You said you wouldn't write things like that and here it is. Having the power to make the world a better place but wouldn't do it. Or is he too stupid to think that he can conquer the Earth just by making the ai do it for him in his ways and place a system that choose a ruler? Basically, mc is saying I will let the world suffer because I am lazy to think (and stupid).
ch 62 New powers? Ngl, this is safer
Video Games · thelightedghost
Kim is actually very smart. You wrote him as typically stupid villain. Mc is truly stupid. He said Kim destroyed the country bla bla bla. Just use a brain and he can actually think that Kim can't change his country for the better with sanctions and all geopolitics. He doesn't have op power like the mc to do so. Jarvis could easily tell that or even the android. Please don't write a villain for the purpose of being a villain. It degrades the story.
ch 46 Two paintings made of blood
Video Games · thelightedghost
If you are going to take over North Korea, you should take over the entire world. North Korea leader is evil because it is necessary for them to be evil. Being sanctioned by the US and all. If you think North Korea is evil then the US is even more evil than North Korea because it is directly responsible for dozens of such country and more.
ch 43 Cloning isn't allowed
Video Games · thelightedghost
Seriously, of all the things mc can take out. He takes out an amulet that discount the price??? Dude probably don't need to worry about money anymore. Tons of game have gold, historic treasure, and etc.
ch 11 Persuade to get 50% discount
Video Games · thelightedghost
You know that the soldier can just carry her and her child? The first rejection was fine as she was able to move but the second one, the soldier just wait in the open instead of just carry her and her child. This is extremely stupid. No logical character would do this. If you want a fight scene then just simply state that the enemy caught up and the soldier need to camp and fight.
ch 648 Emotional Trauma
Sci-fi · Neobear
Chip* not ship
This is the most stupid chapter. For the love one I am willing to risk the lives of million bla bla bla.By hiding the horcruxe of the dark lord. Guess who will return and hunt ur love one? Dumbledore or Voldemort?
ch 382 I'm Not A Good Person
HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader