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Lot of people dont like to read theory books how to write stuff but there are some author discussion groups and blogs that are more fun to read and teach a lot too. I used to be big fan of Ilona Andrews books and she (actually its cuple under one name) has interesting internet blog. Now and then she gives tips how to write better or lets us know how her editors make her writing better. Ofcorse there are stuff about her cats and dogs and... You can look it up. View More

Keht_Jelicho: B works really well, especially in the case of an interlude like this one where all the action is happening in one 'scene' for the most part. Look into some writing guides on Point of View for some help refining how and when/why to change viewpoints between 1st and 3rd person, and whether to use Limited or Omniscient versions of each. In this case where the scene has neither the MC nor any of the established secondary MCs/main Supporting characters (The girls and fox for now) then the general 3rd person viewpoint with insight to known supporting characters' thoughts (the three villages' leaders) and the introduction to potential new supporting characters' (Pier City leaders') thoughts is a very good balance. It was a group discussion, and a revelation of events, outside the awareness of any of the main characters so third person works best in that situation.

Multiple first person POVs work best either when you have multiple main characters together in a scene and want to show them having different thoughts/ opinions/ perspectives of the scene, particularly if it's a mix of protagonists and antagonists (especially if you include an Antagonist as a main character in the future/want to show the thoughts and development of the Antagonist). Such multiple POVs also come in handy when many different things are happening at the same time in different scenes, particularly if the actions are all related to one another or have influence on one another, and can even be used to drive ******* in the case of, for example in your story, a timed quest or synchronized raid where each POV has a job to do at a certain time in order for the quest/ Raid/etc to successfully progress to the next phase. You don't need to use Multiple POVs for every chapter for every character, especially if you want to maintain the story around a single main character. In that case showing the POVs of the supporting characters can be a method to give foreshadowing of what the MC will deal with in the future either directly or indirectly by being involved with the supporting characters and helping with their issues. Constant showing of the other POVs can lead to the audience knowing more of the plot and then it becomes slightly repetitive when you have the MC meet up with them again, or you may leave out stuff such that you can create a plot hole of how the MC knows about stuff when forgetting that they weren't there in the POV where it happened. These are mostly just potential issues as far as your writing goes however.

You're pretty good at how you're handling the different POVs and show an awareness and caution towards these issues, whether by intuition or conscious effort, as shown by how you bring up your concerns and ask for opinions and critiques in your author notes. Just be careful not to become too reliant on the responses to your questions such that you start writing more to fit the responses and less from your own desire to tell a story. Your story doesn't have to be any kind of "perfect" to be a "good story" and perhaps the best way to get better is to just write it and when you finish go back over it to see how/where you can do better in the future with similar scenes, but most importantly so you can see how you grew as a writer over the course of the story.

Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C57
22 hours ago

Keht_Jelicho: B works really well, especially in the case of an interlude like this one where all the action is happening in one 'scene' for the most part. Look into some writing guides on Point of View for some help refining how and when/why to change viewpoints between 1st and 3rd person, and whether to use Limited or Omniscient versions of each. In this case where the scene has neither the MC nor any of the established secondary MCs/main Supporting characters (The girls and fox for now) then the general 3rd person viewpoint with insight to known supporting characters' thoughts (the three villages' leaders) and the introduction to potential new supporting characters' (Pier City leaders') thoughts is a very good balance. It was a group discussion, and a revelation of events, outside the awareness of any of the main characters so third person works best in that situation.

Multiple first person POVs work best either when you have multiple main characters together in a scene and want to show them having different thoughts/ opinions/ perspectives of the scene, particularly if it's a mix of protagonists and antagonists (especially if you include an Antagonist as a main character in the future/want to show the thoughts and development of the Antagonist). Such multiple POVs also come in handy when many different things are happening at the same time in different scenes, particularly if the actions are all related to one another or have influence on one another, and can even be used to drive ******* in the case of, for example in your story, a timed quest or synchronized raid where each POV has a job to do at a certain time in order for the quest/ Raid/etc to successfully progress to the next phase. You don't need to use Multiple POVs for every chapter for every character, especially if you want to maintain the story around a single main character. In that case showing the POVs of the supporting characters can be a method to give foreshadowing of what the MC will deal with in the future either directly or indirectly by being involved with the supporting characters and helping with their issues. Constant showing of the other POVs can lead to the audience knowing more of the plot and then it becomes slightly repetitive when you have the MC meet up with them again, or you may leave out stuff such that you can create a plot hole of how the MC knows about stuff when forgetting that they weren't there in the POV where it happened. These are mostly just potential issues as far as your writing goes however.

You're pretty good at how you're handling the different POVs and show an awareness and caution towards these issues, whether by intuition or conscious effort, as shown by how you bring up your concerns and ask for opinions and critiques in your author notes. Just be careful not to become too reliant on the responses to your questions such that you start writing more to fit the responses and less from your own desire to tell a story. Your story doesn't have to be any kind of "perfect" to be a "good story" and perhaps the best way to get better is to just write it and when you finish go back over it to see how/where you can do better in the future with similar scenes, but most importantly so you can see how you grew as a writer over the course of the story.

Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C57
22 hours ago

BookDevourer87: Nope... Moral is you DO have to cheat if you want to transmigrate 😏 so lady's and gentlemen, start your cheat engines! See U on the other side 😁

Abe the Wizard · C1
1 day ago
B as its more imersive.
Question too - are you planning to make the game world into paralel real world? Or are npc here with truly high ai? As right now it dont seem to be normal coded game. Depending of your choise you can mess up the real word acordingly. View More
Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C57
1 day ago
This female elf was nataturaly... This man/woman was natutaly... you use that sort of stuff soo much that its geting really anoying. I would recomend to use it less and use more he did that... she does that... and other normal stuff that dont shake reader out of his smooth reading. Same goes with cene changing. Normal is 1 or max 2 main characters as description lead in a chapter or it just gets messy and does not flow smootly. View More

PopcornSectMaster: Thanks, as usual. It's been updated :)

Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C52
1 day ago
Its not only the translators fault. The author has like a month or 2 stable almost daily chapters and then disapares 2-3 months without notice and comes back for month and gone agen did it several times like that for more than a year at least. View More

Beer_is_Good: Good to know, I had assumed it was still caught up since the original TL here was really solid about communication/translating chapters. Maybe Qidian pulled him to a diff project or something. Hard to really keep track of everything with Qidian literally never communicating. Guess I should checked novelupdates tho.

Superstars of Tomorrow · C443
1 week ago
Its not caught up with translations thats old news - translation caught up 1,5 years ago and then started agen later with slower translation. Right now there is 486 raw chapters but the writer reliese is very unstable. View More

Beer_is_Good: It's caught up in chapters so their release schedule is entirely based off when the author releases a new chapter. This **** is a straight up scam lmao. Greedy ass company legit doesn't give a **** about its readers.

Superstars of Tomorrow · C443
1 week ago

Valerienne: I am highly disappointed and disgruntled that this has gone privileged...it doesn't make sense given its release schedule...

Superstars of Tomorrow · C443
1 week ago

rconniving: F*ck, this is one of my favorite all time novels and I already pay for the chapters but now the latest chapters are behind another pay wall. I’ll pay once for a chapter but not twice. This is really scummy behavior by whoever did this.

Superstars of Tomorrow · C443
1 week ago

SkyAboveTheSky: Knowing Noah's nature he will exchange what he don't need with sect resources like beast bodies but I hope he keeps most of stuff for the rainy days. Making his sect strong is important and the copying technique should cover it.. i would like him to keep it a secret being his heir just like june but it will be revealed when he provides for sect

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C406
2 weeks ago

Complicate: But why should he lose money while trading with the Sect? And i know how rare darkness element is, my point was, in that Sect no one gives a sh1t about him and his element when hes still in the human ranks. Why Elder Iris (or smth)did not offer him some good free stuff when she found out about his darkness element, and what kind of monster he was for his age. She dont give a f... and you know that. He dont owe them... Now that he have a fortune, you re telling me that is should be cool to give it all for some ****ty credits... Cultivation rooms, reasorces, other darkness stuff... Nah - be a good boy and do it for free.

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C406
2 weeks ago

Complicate: Yeah a good Way to be poor again. The Sect have rules "nothing for free". If you want credit you do Jobs. Just like chapters ago he was forced to give 2 spells for his darkness one. Where is "we are one" mentality is this case? They would kill him if not for those oaths. So yeah give them all for free just BC they re "your Sect" pathetic thinking and lets not forget about his individuality... Should he drop that lone Wolf character and be a Sect Hero...?

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C406
2 weeks ago

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Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C46
2 weeks ago
I think no author dislikes nice suportive words in comments and review sections🙂.
Now and then pashing some poisonous commentators in my faivorite books comment sections are needed too. Cant make authors loos their will to write. View More

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Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C46
2 weeks ago
Reading time rewards worked fiew days after its relise and then it stoped working at least for me. Also coins that have not bought with money count as virtual rewards and dont give authors real money. View More

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Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C46
2 weeks ago
Yeah - did not bother to even change names.
Later on we find out that history really changed starting 1921y. So it should have been fine to have same names and stuff before it and diverge after that. View More

Lcator1: It's still lazy, real world corporations were utilised.

World's Best Martial Artist
2 weeks ago
Actually I read bit futher in raws with google translator. There are several Chinese novels that start very badly because at start characters are just dislikable.
This novel falls in the same category. As mc starts university his characters is mostly fixed up by the author and world building starts to make some sense too. You just have to muck through garbage 100+ chapters to get better novel experience. View More

Lcator1: As a wise man once said, "this is utter bull ****"

World's Best Martial Artist
2 weeks ago
B from me too and she could end up as his assasin diciple there. View More
Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C48
2 weeks ago

MadRat1286: I hope she reaches him short of her 10 lvl, so that she see‘s his abilities to transform into different forms and then follows him likewise. Maybe the system helps her too. 😉😏

Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C39
2 weeks ago
And he soposedly spent all sunday prepering for the exam... View More

badgirlbee: he's supposed to take a exam and yet he don't even know sh!t about the content of the exam.

World's Best Martial Artist · C7
3 weeks ago

star_ocean: Should've increased mentality since he's an idiot.

World's Best Martial Artist · C6
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C5
Disapointig translated novel. Mc with low IQ high ego and 0 good points goes 10 years back in time 2008y but into illogical parallel world that has all that our world has but all big wigs are matial artists. I think beside being arrogant dick and stealing from his little sister mc has nothing going for him. Translation is so so too as it does not bother to translate all words like for example university exam...

To wn development team: This has lot of fake reviews here with no content or with same copy paste from different acounts. Is it normal now to let this crap be as reviews? View More
World's Best Martial Artist
3 weeks ago

DeadlinerV: Of course he would. The comment sections of his novel is like his own little community, it's were he gets his motivation and feedbacks.
I'm not saying you to stop complaining all the time, you do you, but if you (or anybody else) start sending insults, the only thing that you might do is affect his motivation and lead to the dropping. It's a long term thing but it's possible.
So let's keep the critics clean of insults...as for memes and jokes, it's a welcomed kind of pollution xD

Birth of the Demonic Sword · C396
3 weeks ago
I really would like to read how his copy fights and how his oponent reacts to it - please!
And thank you for your writings so far - please dont take the anoying comments to hart. Most of the readers like whats writen and are more sad about the fact that they cant make instant conections to authors brains to get faster updates. View More
Birth of the Demonic Sword · C396
3 weeks ago

AlexzY: For some reason, I feel that you, my readers, read with a magnifying glass every time Alex speaks, to see that at the end of the sentence, he has said [Nya] or else you will make a revolt because of I didn't place it.

Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C45
3 weeks ago
Happy new year and good to hear that you have an editor now! View More
Being a Cat in a Dungeon, It's not easy · C45
3 weeks ago

scarlett1414: Kalla! Cruel Author, don't you dare do anything bad to my Kalla!

Supreme Magus · C369
3 weeks ago
And happy new year to the author too! View More
Immortal Era's Crafting Master · C44
3 weeks ago
Happy new year! And thank you for geting new chapters as 2020 began here. View More
Supreme Magus · C365
3 weeks ago
Nice - I like this cover! View More

Kerail: One of the better original game novels here. Mc gets 2nd chance in life as he takes over jung man from modern world that has virtual reality games. As he had hectic assain life his last life in fantasy like world he now wants more normal life. So he starts his virtual reality game where he is op because its similar to his last life.
Now the good part is that this novel has some original ideas and not very big plot holes as of now. Also its mc friends character designs are not bad. As latelly I have droped novels as I could not stomach mc friends (who are so anoying that no sane man would take them as friends).
There are still 2 things that are bit anoying: 1. Mc goes with the flow too easily even if he only wants to be crafter, 2. Now mc who should be clueless about games often seems smarter about games than profecional famers who he interacts.
So lets wait and sea how tgis novel develops. It could end up one of the better game novels or flop no idea right now.

Author please add cover to the novel. Even simple white page with novel name and authors name is ok.

Immortal Era's Crafting Master
3 weeks ago
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