the flow is all wrong, its like you are just writing your ideas with no structure, maybe use ai to improve the chapters.
grasp for breath
When he could no longer feel that divine power, Balthazar couldn't help but gasp for Qi.
Movies · TripleCrownss
english translation be like "has some truth to it"
"There is indeed something miraculous about it. It seems that in this world, a Sacred Artifact stained with the blood of God has some Dao to it."
Movies · TripleCrownss
dao of balance heh, english uses more the term law of balance
"Demons belong to Hell, angels belong to Heaven; this is the Dao of balance in this world."
Movies · TripleCrownss
like the shikai chant, an image of it would be nice
where did he suddenly get a hero syndrom?!
didn't he transmigrate twice? should be more than 15 for sure!
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Anime & Comics · kapa_69
you did so great, proud of you !!!!
they found a new thing to hate i think hehehehe
'Their deep-seated anger towards the Makli Clan, responsible for the death of their families, must be driving them.'
Others · NeverluckySMILE
good story, good progress, world with great potential ...........................................................................................
Train Survival: I Can Sublimate Anything!
Anime & Comics · FicFic