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Alinterelins: Wait a moment. Delphina have to know Jon's father. After all he's quite a top god of Blades. Jonrad and Jonhild looks so similar to the point 'almost tweens' as far as previous encounters with father's 'friends from work' have been. Sooo will their first time meeting be game-like or she will misunderstood them as well?

Dragonborn Saga · C508
3 months ago
He had that for a while now, it's the Bardic Knowledge skill if I'm not remembering that falsely. He definitely got it in Hermaeus Mora's library though. View More

FrozenShadow1: Did he always have Hermaeus Mora's blessing or is that the chaos thing?

Dragonborn Saga · C503
3 months ago
I figured. But still shouldn't you check things like that when you take over a translation? Names as well I get so confused when a translator changes and suddenly half the cast has different names without any mention or explanation at all. View More

Aashish_Badami: The translation changed. Also, I'm so used to reading divine sense from ISSTH, I wish it was the same here

Renegade Immortal · C167
4 months ago

Moustachio: We had to take a decision Don.
Play Elder Scrolls Legends or read Dragonborn Saga.
I made my choice.

Dragonborn Saga · C481
5 months ago

KingGrizzly: I can say that despite the atrocious grammar and spelling, it is a very good fanfic. Sometimes the story can be annoying and sometimes it can be exciting, but overall enjoyable. I also like how the story/Author doesn't solely focus on the MC too much and actually shows some of the other characters opinion and perspective. But Jesus Christ the grammar and spelling is a major turn off for new readers, the only thing that made me stick around was the story and the fact that I liked where it was heading.

The one thing that I don't like, the one character that I actually don't find interesting is the MC. While the Author has done amazing with the direction the story is heading I can't say the rest for the other aspects as most of the world-building and characters were already established. The MC often calls and treats Emilia as a kid or naive, but I also think that the MC is naive, like a child trying to act tough, serious and *****-like. He cant let go of the past and surprisingly neither can the past, which is kind of annoying looking at it from the outsiders perspective.

Now, these reasons aren't the reason I don't find the MC as an interesting character, in fact, I don't see him as a character at all, more like a tool. The MC is reincarnated and has barely done anything fun because of a disease that forces him to stay at home in his previous world. When he is reincarnated into a different world he still clinging to that world and the relationships in it, which I can understand, but is very annoying. The reason I think of him as a tool is that he has no ambition and only wishes to have the bare minimum to survive which is fine and all but is extremely boring.

The fact that he starts to take interest in Emilia is also ****ed up as he kind of just wants a replacement for his ex-lover. An emotional support pillar I guess you could say. But what bugs me the most is that he has no drive, no goals, no dreams, and anything particularly noteworthy that separates himself from the common rabble except his strength. He has so much power but he uses it to support Emilia instead for his own goals and does everything for Emilia, it feels like watching a loyal dog doing all sorts of tricks.

Now I don't want to be that guy that I'm pretty sure we all hate (or maybe that's just me) but "Make a harem". It is actually so annoying to see that he has no one to cling to except Emilia and only uses his awesome abilities for someone else. If he had a harem he wouldn't seem that attached to Emilia and **** like that and maybe he might have his own ambitions not just following Emilia around just like Rem following Subaru, or Subaru following Emilia. It doesn't even have to be a harem, just make it so he does not live only for Emilia cause it's actually annoying as **** in my opinion when someone has no motives and just does what other people tell them to.

Also while I think the MC "thinks" he is in love with Emilia, I feel like it's more sinister than that as I feel like instead of looking at her as Emilia, I think he's see's Emilia as replacement for his past lover that he had to break up with due to his disease. I feel like he does all these amazing and wonderful things for her to burry the guilt in his heart so that he convinces himself that he loves Emilia, he himself has somewhat recognized and even touched upon that subject in his thoughts. That's all I had to say and I hope that the MC gets better.

Starting life in another world
6 months ago

shelwyn: This is the story begins with the life of a 30 year old man who had a rough life. His parents used to be business owners but were plotted against and ruined. The MC had up to the age of 15 a good life. He was a top student, personality wise he was very popular. His life went downhill after the business core technology was stolen and his parents were crippled. He was bullied in school and couldn't afford to go to college.

During high school he took up various odd jobs, modeling since he was a good looking guy, ginseng search he learnt from a co worker, yoga teacher, barista, carpentry, general labor. Until the age of 30 he experienced various things and this is where the story starts. Okay so that's the story setting were introduced to him as a 30 year old who has gone through various things and how he gets a chance to become someone great.

The translation starts off very rough, the first two or three chapters are a bit difficult to get through. The sentence are bland, the MC seems like a nice guy but a total fool. I think the translator was new and adjusting to translation for the first time perhaps. There are a lot of things the translator gets wrong at first. He doesn't do tense right and the story seems to lose out a lot of the details so it becomes very bland. After a few chapters you can tell the translator got way better and the chapters start flowing way better. Not great but better, good enough where it doesn't completely take you out of the immersion every few paragraphs. I gave it two starts in translation quality because the first few chapters are the most important and they need to be retranslated.

I cant say anything about the update stability so I gave it 3/5 stars. The novel is new and the updates aren't steady yet. Looks like munpia is probing the market so to speak.

The story line is decent. The MC is fairly lucky but he does not succeed every time. He had ups and downs and it's way more realistic than not.

Character design and world background I'll give 4/5 they both seem okay. The story doesn't seem like a magical realism to me but just a normal earth setting. The characters are progressing. They dont stay the same no matter what happens. They change, they get more skilled or they change in attitudes. They progress as people but it's too early to see I'd it keeps going that way.

I like the novel hope this review helps anyone else choose whether to read it or not. I know my review is 3.5/4 stars but that's only because the first few chapters are what people mostly use to decide reading further or not and the first few are poorly translated. I would give it a 4/5 stars if not for that.

The Famous Millionaire
6 months ago
Do go for advanced chapters. I personally won't read them as I'm broke and can't afford it but it's always a nice thing for patrons and it's not like the bull**** "advanced" paywall chapters webnovel is doing patrons will only get them earlier after all. So by all means go for it. View More
Dragonborn Saga · C463
6 months ago

Don_Dokhmesy: I know, right? ... Like in every movie they seal a villain and he comes back later I be like... What's wrong with murder?

Dragonborn Saga · C463
6 months ago
No, they literally changed the name after like 160 chapter because why the f not. View More

KingSitri: I belive Divine Sense is to a soul what nerves are to a brain, once a divine sense accumulates to a certain degree, it has a chance to gain it's own consciousness and become a soul. Divine Sense is after all a consciousness spread outside a body.

Renegade Immortal · C167
7 months ago

Treviisolion: To be more specific, Charlemagne who had reunited much of the former Western Roman Empire, including taking over Rome at the Pope’s request, and having been converted to Christianity was crowned by the Pope as the successor the Western Roman Empire that fell several centuries prior, the Pope being the ruler of Rome was seen as having the legitimacy to crown the ruler of Rome, this also came at a time when the Byzantium Empire (i.e. the Eastern Roman Empire) came under the rule of a woman for the first time. Charlemagne left it up to his sons to duke it out for the empire and it split into three. Western Francia became France, Middle Francia or Lotharingia eventually fell apart and was subsumed by the other two kingdoms, and Eastern Francia expanded into the rest of Germany, and under Otto I conquered Northern Italy including Rome (again at Papal request) from Lotharingia and was re-crowned as Holy Roman Emperor. He took the name of Kaiser which came from Caesar which was one of the names Roman Emperors would often take, used Latin as the official language and did rule over Rome if indirectly, but the power base was in Germany not Italy, and over the years the Emperors lost power as Emperors even as their personal holdings grew (after a certain point the Habsburgs which ruled over Austria pretty much always won despite the title being elective and as rulers of Austria they gained tons of power leading to the Austrian-Hungarian Empire which was nearly the same size as the HRE being under their control by the time the HRE was dissolved), the title was made elective in the 13th century where seven constitutionally designated electors (various powerful dukes at that time) would elect a ruler to be crowned as King of Germany where they would then go to Rome to be coronated as Holy Roman Empire, the Hapsburgs forged a document a century or two later to give themselves the fictitious title of Archdukes of Austria and thus were able to leverage that to become the de facto ruling dynasty, at some point there was a woman HRE which was so controversial her father spent so much time making certain Europe would accept her he forgot to teach her how to be a good Empress, during the mid-16th century the Protestant Reformation happened along with the 30 years war which made it so what religion a country could be was to be determined by the ruler of that country and that others would refrain from interfering, which meant practically that from the Catholic HRE rulers, the northern half of their empire were heretics and they couldn’t do anything about it not to mention it paved the way for the “German Princedoms” (i.e. every duke, count, baron, or tiny noble lord that swore fealty directly to the Emperor) to more or less act completely independently leading to hundreds of these tiny irrelevant princedoms, Italy slowly gained de facto and de jure independence, earlier on there was a dispute between the HRE and the pope so the HRE stopped ruling over Rome even in name, and of course without Italy Latin eventually ceased to be used except in the most formal settings, so by the time it was dissolved by Napoleon, it was famously stated to neither be Holy, Roman, nor an Empire.

King of German Mercenaries · C1
7 months ago
Fun fact: The Holy Roman Empire has absolutely nothing to do with the Roman Empire or the Roman Republic rather it rose from Charlemange and his "Empire". View More
King of German Mercenaries · C1
7 months ago

Rexus: Agreed. People sometimes don't know **** about how hard it is to write a good story which people can enjoy. I'm no patron but I've been following this book closely from the start and know that Don has always been churning out chapter after chapter of this novel with good storytelling and sticking to the source as closely as possible. It may not be the best of the best but it is damn well dear to heart and is still one the best written fanfics out of all the thousands, if not millions out there. Though I say this those people may have there own reasons to move away and it is better to watch then to point fingers.

Dragonborn Saga · C418
9 months ago
Somehow you managed to release two chapters and yet end them on the same cliff as the chapter before... View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C0
11 months ago
Reading Status: C47
Well, It's a story by Wiz and anyone that read Reborn: Evolving form nothing will know to expect some of the best quality content on this site.
Apart from the rather sporadic updates, there is really nothing to complain about, but even then you have to remember that this is his 'secondary' story so that is to be expected. View More
Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3
11 months ago
we really do View More

Imanhuwel: Jesus, we need more

Dragonborn Saga · C359
11 months ago

Imanhuwel: Jesus, we need more

Dragonborn Saga · C359
11 months ago

LogicEmulater: *Aged Wisened Voice*
And here we have a conman Heron in his natural enviornment. Typically preying on large organizations in the first layer Conman Heron is a powerful expert who plays these fools like suckers. He knows how and when to act around these complete morons. This is but the first step in a long line of conning in the life cycle of a Conman Heron and once caught digivolves to a digimon who has a living typo for a name Micheal. When fighting a digivolved Conman Heron the only notable difference is the lack of limits it will place on it's abilities fighting like a shopper on black friday who just saw the last game console on sale in someone elses hands and using a variety of abilities that were patched out in the mmorpg the seven layeres on layer 2 and up he can one shot you. Be careful though as a newbie player of the seven layers as Micheal was quite literally made as the secondary protagonist to the player charachter who may or may not be important depending on how you play. Micheal is notorious for killing noobs who player kill other players and is highly skilled.

Reborn: Apocalypse - Volume 3 · C0
1 year ago

Yruama: Hehe I'm waiting for this

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago

TobascoDragoon: Reporter: sweeping death toll strikes again. Massive increase in the amounts of suicides reported have authorities baffled. In most cases the subject is a lonely Male between 17-30, with memorabilia of kazuki kazuya in his female persona. Reports are still coming in...

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago

Anwe: We need a camera no let me rephrase several cameras for this oh so wonderful occasion!

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago
Damn alot of people like my comment maybe I should comment more lel View More

Lysistrata: I really want to know how Ayame is going to react to the news that her friend has really always been her loveinterest... Thats going to be great.

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago

TheeUnknownSaint: Yeah I always thought the misunderstanding would go on forever. It’d be really stupid if it did lol. I’m happy it was solve earlier. Though this scene would be better on a Court or something considering it’s on tv

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago
Since when? She only knew that Kaguya was apparently Kazuyas fiance thats all. View More

andazii: She knew already

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago

KuMoKo: Ayame: always has been you!?
Kazuya: ...

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago

Lysistrata: I really want to know how Ayame is going to react to the news that her friend has really always been her loveinterest... Thats going to be great.

Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago
I really want to know how Ayame is going to react to the news that her friend has really always been her loveinterest... Thats going to be great. View More
Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C170
1 year ago
Glad to see this story back hopefully the next chapter won't take 2 weeks *crosses fingers* View More
Edea: Hero Summoning Conspiracy · C166
1 year ago

Vanilla_the_sixth: Battleborn: i bet 10 septims jon's gonna fk her.
Sheo: i bet 100 septims she has a dick
Battleborn: what?!
Sheo: what?

Dragonborn Saga · C305
1 year ago

pokeperson1000: Not really the premium, but more so the re-locking of old chapters that still gets me mad every time.

MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks · C79
1 year ago
Damn I'm from around Holstein and I didn't know our cows are supposed to be that amazing. The more you know. View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System · C73
1 year ago
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