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jclozanoc

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"Come back and light me on fire!"

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The Superior Mother snorted and crossed her arms. "That brat of mine is incapable of sitting still. This is just the start. By the time the day has come to an end, he will become the talk of red humanity. Again."

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Whether it was the Bloodfire Pact, the magical refinement process or the complete formation of a Super Brain, the heavens had grown jealous at what Ves had managed to cobble together!

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Yes

As the Red Fleet pushed Caramond Perle's name to such an excessive degree, many people began to wonder whether the powerful organization had come under the control of a madman.

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So... there WILL be tribulation lightning...

"Wishing Fountain, please use my ticket to give me access to a way to resist tribulation lightning!"

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"This better succeed."

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so he recognizes it

Yet Dread Captain Volkert Argile still granted Ves a lot of leeway, more than any other mech designer and outsider should ever possess.

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so he admits he is not sane...

Yet Ves could not bring himself to stop what he was doing. From a rational perspective, the potential gains were massive, but the risks were too high for any sane person to choose this course of action.

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"I shall keep that in mind. This is useful to know. Please give me an overview of the sort of rituals that you have in mind. If any of it involves human sacrifice or other depraved acts, then do not expect us to agree."

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nahh, the mechers wouldnt allows this without the god pilot willingness

Instead, it took on the shape of a human figure that consisted entirely of flame!

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couldnit be a piecenof the first flame and this the trigger for his attack?

Instead, it took on the shape of a human figure that consisted entirely of flame!

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and now the fleeters owe Ves their soul, heart and backside

"There are lots of benefits!" Ves responded. "It will not only allow your Red Fleet to remain in direct contact with this entity, but its growth will also spur on the growth of your dreadnought! The more powerful the ancestral spirit becomes, the more difficult it is to defeat the Dominion of Man in battle! Her rise in combat performance will far exceed that of the other 7 dreadnoughts! I even theorize that it might just fulfill the original goal of creating them all. As long as the Dominion of Man continues to embody the spirit of human domination, she may ultimately gain the power to win a fight against a god mech!"

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"How much are you willing to pay to command what may possibly become the strongest warship in the Red Ocean?"

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The sense of doom and gloom grew even stronger as Lieutenant-Commander Astrid Jameson maintained a grave expression as she slowly moved towards the center of the speaking pit. 

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[DON'T MIND ME. I LIKE CATS.]

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This is an attack on ves as a person, not on his living mechs: "he is a bad person so his products must be bad"

"You!" Astrid pushed her finger towards a hapless-looking Ves. "As the ancestors of the Jameson Spaceborn Clan once stood against the evil witches and warlocks that sought to sacrifice the lives of our entire population to feed their delusions of power, I shall bravely stand against the evil magic that you are attempting to spread to your unknowing customers! You are not a mech designer. You are a cultist who wants to do nothing more than to lead red humanity into an age of ignorance and superstition!"

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I know it is well written because I am already hating these opponents

Master Cantor pressed her fingers together. "That is correct, and that is the reason why it is completely irresponsible to allow your living mechs to be used by the masses without absolutely verifying whether they are safe and benign. You are akin to a pharmaceutical company who has decided to put on an experimental medicine on the market after conducting only a handful of brief clinical trials. I should not have to tell you how irresponsible it is to let this happen. Your living mechs are the same in this regard. As far as I am concerned, your attempts to redefine mechs so that they can match your vision is not only premature, but also dangerous. Our Association is tasked with protecting mech pilots, and that is exactly what we intend to do over the course of the public inquiry. I bear no ill will towards you in person, but for the sake of our mech community, they must be protected against your dangerous creations."

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foreshadowing of Master

Ves suddenly had a powerful hunch that if he followed through with this collaborative research direction, he may be able to make Carmine mechs practical enough to realize his design philosophy shortly afterwards!

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