josvalve - Profile

I like this history a lot, I think you need to fix some issues when you talk about a girl and use she/her correctly, but so far is pretty good, also maybe use a little less of the anime chapters that you take to describe the movie, but so far I like it a lot.

The author needs to improve his English, and the MC is a pushover. He just let his father choose where he will work and don't do anything else.

The story is good, but you read 6 chapters and the next 6 chapter are a recap of the 6 chapters that you already read, jus so the autor can have new chapter this is trash.

drooping................................................................................................................................ .....

Everything was okay until the author make the MC been attract to a trap drooping this novel..................................................