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Join Wyatt Wilkins as he navigates the treacherous and exhilarating landscape of the Marvel Cinematic Universe. Wyatt's journey is far from easy in a world filled with powerful heroes and formidable villains, especially for those without innate abilities.
However, he has a distinct advantage: the incredible powers of Atom Eve from the Invincible universe. With her extraordinary skills at his disposal, Wyatt is ready to forge a remarkable path to greatness, striving to become one of Earth's mightiest heroes.
Note: While this story will follow the MCU closely, it won't be one-to-one. I will add and change several aspects of the universe to keep you all on your toes.
I’ll try to upload three times a week, but no promises. I’m writing this mainly for fun.
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Excellent fic with one of the coolest powers imo, eve was so heavily nerfed in invincible it felt like a joke, so this soothes some of the injustice in my heart. The MC is a good person with a moral compass and complexities, read this and give it stones :)
Peak. Simply peak. As long as you aren't an edgy webnovel gremlin you will love watching as a conflicted man becomes a true hero. It is quite evident, especially later on, that the author is setting the main character up to essentially be this marvels version of Superman. But I see nothing wrong with that or the fact it is a story that merges a lot of comic & movie stuff together. Won't say what movies or series for spoiler reasons but I feel they have been well implemented very well so far.
Decent fic for the most part, the biggest gripe I have with the story is the constant talking that mc does to himself, when it could’ve just been written as thoughts instead. Seriously man, just read your own writing and tell me how dumb it sounds to talk to yourself out loud in public, especially when it’s about mcu things. I stopped reading this because it happens too much. I know it may seem a little harsh, but this is literal common sense. You don’t see Harry Potter constantly talking to himself alone out loud for no reason. It’s supposed to be done sparingly.
I had previously reviewed this story and gave it 4.5 stars. But honestly now at ch 30+ the novel’s grown quite boring. The ”heroicness” of the MC is still there but it’s drowned by boring drama. The initial high rating was bc the MC wasnt your typical edgy, perfect MC. And that was great, but now the author’s exchanged one extreme for another. The MC is now a dramatic who practically always has a moral debate with himself about heroics. It’s needless internal drama and is basically there every ch now and its hella gawddamn annoying. EVERYTIME he comes back from a patrol, it feels like “Could I be saving more mutants? Am I really doing everything I can?” Drama drama drama. Went from a non perfect non edgy MC to a wannabe perfect savior complex MC and frankly that aint my cup of tea.
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This story presents an intriguing premise with underlying irony, particularly in its attempt to centre a character meant to transcend authorial control. However, the execution consistently contradicts that goal, resulting in moments that feel more constrained than the work it's based on. Which is hilarious considering how standoff-ish the author is when critiques of any kind are made against his character's caveman actions. But I'm getting ahead of myself. The writing quality is serviceable—clear and competent without being overly elaborate, though it rarely conveys a strong sense of style or distinctiveness. Update consistency aligns with the standard pace of this platform that favours quantity over quality, and while regular, it doesn’t always enhance narrative cohesion. Story development is uneven. Certain arcs or scenes demonstrate promise, while others lack direction or emotional resonance. The narrative often feels disconnected from the broader world it inhabits, with developments that appear superficial or insufficiently integrated. Character development hinges primarily on the protagonist’s symbolic design—specifically, the concept of two individuals metaphorically stitched together. This concept offered meaningful thematic potential, especially when paired with the character’s powers, but unfortunately, it was underexplored and ultimately sidelined as a secondary plot device. The worldbuilding similarly lacks consistency. While there are brief moments where the setting feels vibrant and alive, these instances are sparse and not well sustained. Overall, the background feels underdeveloped, leaving the reader with an impression of a setting that is both hollow and intermittently compelling. With additional focus on deeper thematic integration and more deliberate pacing, the story could better fulfil its conceptual promise.
Story's Flow and Character Consistency The writing style itself isn't the primary issue; rather, it's the deus ex machina elements that disrupt the story's flow. Here are some specific points: Character Age and Maturity: The protagonist, despite having transmigrated and combined memories with another person, consistently acts like an 11-14 year old. This contradicts the potential for a more mature perspective that should come with merged memories. Unquestioned Wealth: It's unrealistic that characters who know the protagonist's impoverished and criminal past (like his housemate and "pizza Selena") don't question the source of his newfound wealth. Accepting money from someone with a "shit history" without suspicion strains credibility. Intelligence Inconsistencies: The fanfiction exaggerates the protagonist's brain as being able to process information like a "quantum computer," yet he often behaves with an intelligence level to an adult with an IQ of 51. This inconsistency is gnarly by katseye. Forced Romance: The romantic development feels unnatural and forced, resembling the "one look is all it takes(by dua lipa)" trope, which lacks believable build-up. Repetitive and Exaggerated Details: The story suffers from repetitive details and exaggerations that detract from its overall quality. Writing Quality: This evaluates the author's skill in weaving their original narrative into the existing anime storyline, taking into account both the execution and my personal enjoyment of their writing. Story Development: I rate the coherence and plausibility of the fanfiction's plot, specifically how seamlessly and logically it expands upon or integrates with the anime's established story. Characters: This category covers two aspects: the depth and growth of the author's original characters from their introduction, and the consistency of established anime characters with their canonical portrayals. Update Stability: My rating for update stability will automatically be set to the lowest star rating achieved in any of the other categories. World Background: I assess the fanfiction's setting based on its adherence to the anime's established world, or the creativity and effectiveness of any original elements the author introduces
Decent fic. A bit of disappointment regarding story development and character design. Has a cliche plot of time travel or something, from what it seems. MC has a limiter in his mind, limiting his powers and an entity guarding it, who appears to be from a future suggesting a world or reality destruction plot. And MC's character is weak like izuku from mha
It honestly doesn't deserve more than 3.5 in the best case scenario. 1. There's no weight to the writing. The author tries but the writing lacks that maturity and quality to reflect it. 2. Author ends up making fun of himself. In one part he critiques the nerf of eve by writers but he consistently does it all the time every time a serious fight takes place. For someone who can just take oxygen into water in ur mouth, the mc is incredibly stupid and unimaginative. 3. "The characters are only as smart as the author." This is very apparent. 4. He is JUST another hero, lacking any truly unique heroic qualities. He lacks caps willpower, tonys ability to make the sacrifice. He only trains and then goes around fighting street level crimes. He doesnt try to solve things. He applies a band aid and moves on. he's probably less useful than someone like daredevil. 5. HE IS WEAK. I get it that u don't want to go murderhobo. But he's so useless in using his powers. He can just shoes into concrete. Use his energy platforms to destabilize them instead. So many ways. 6. So many more things.
This fanfic is not to my taste, the author made his Mc very moral like a Carbon Copy of Spider-man only with a different power. his actions like almost dying by a shotgun in Chapter 19 made me realize that he is very stupid. Who would start playing with a mutant who has Plasma Attacks. I have never seen such a waste of Strength, you can literally incapacitate anyone by modifying their Clothing to turn them into Swiss cheese so that they don't die but are disabled by Pain. There is also his sense of existential Void knowing that he is not a mutant. As if that information were important, it is practically giving yourself a Label to feel comfortable with yourself. Leaving all this aside, if you want a Mc Justiciero OP this is Perfect so you can read it comfortably, since my complaints are my type of taste for the MCs I read
it's too dramatic, it's a fanfiction, and the more seriously the author tries to do it, the worse it turns out. Chinese authors just do whatever they want, and our hero has everything, including money, but he tries to do everything himself like a child. I don't like drama, and I want to nerf the hero.
A story that starts well, but very quickly the character becomes a hero character, identically as for another story 'Rogue Replacement: A Marvel Story', the author is tired and uses artificial intelligence a lot. even if it is done in a correct way, we can only notice the silly smoothing done by the protagonist, and a uniformity of the characters who play it. I had given 4 stars to these two stories, now I give 2,6 stars for the work provided at the beginning, and I will not recommend it among my 20 favorite stories...
TLDR: Good Plot, Terrible Power Choice, MC is a Naive Idealist on purpose and that's okay. Story is about a character who has a Save Everyone, Kill Nobody mind set. Proper morals. IMO he seems a little too weak minded to have organically become like that, but that's just writing. Best way to describe the MC is a Superman-Complex in the exact definition. I think that's fine and it doesn't affect my review. The Atom Eve Powers are... as inconsistent as they can be. He seems to have no limits on what he is doing, until he does. His power seems to not have any limits other that sightline and energy, but how much energy? Never explained. During all major fights up to the point I read, he immediately forgets to do basic things like manipulation until the fight is nearly over. All of my issues with the book come from this. Author makes the MC say in chapter 10 that he specifically can use Atom Eve's power without plot contrivance. Chapter 43 is where I stopped and that is still not true.
Good story, but no my cup of tea. Also, I must ask: why pink? I get that it was in the original, but man that looks bad on male hero. .......…
Finally someone has made a fic with her powers. Hope It is good i Will rate It when i finish It.
The author complained about how the invincible creators nerfed atom eve, then proceeded to do the exact same thing with his mc. This novel could be way better but it's held back by way too many inconsistencies and stupid decisions.
Author tries to make a smart no kill rule protagonist but fails He is stupid and doesn’t use his literal supercomputer brain That said the plot is good but the mc does the hardest path of the right thing to do For example he could’ve just gone public in an interview say mutants and people too Or something to that effect
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the thing with good guy MCs is that u have to do it perfectly, to make the story enjoyable. and this MC definitely wasn't one of them.
Nice to see a heroic MC. All the slop of edgy, self-centered, MCs these days are so tiring that a classic hero story is refreshing. Amazing story, Wyatt is a good MC, and the the power is interesting! Looking forward for more and great job, author!