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Ten years ago, mana descended upon Earth in the form of Gates that opened into other worlds. These Gates contained Magical Beasts of unfathomable strength and power that preyed upon humans and sought the destruction of everything around them.
But along with the Gates, humans gained the power of Gifts—super abilities that allowed them to fight back against the monsters and take back their world.
Now, the Superhumans with Gifts are tasked with defending the people and ensuring that the Gates, which open all over the world, do not bring about the end of them all.
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Jason Marc was just your regular seventeen-year-old high school student whose father abandoned him ten years ago. He worked two part-time jobs while also helping his mom with her diner to aid with the finances, but he could have never guessed that his entire world would change on the eve of his eighteenth birthday.
Now, with more power than any one man should possess and an army at his beck and call, Jason works toward protecting those close to him while finding out the truth behind the emergence of the Gates—and preventing the end of the world.
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Bir değerlendirme yazGreat book with a chess themed Necromancer system. The MC is likable and family oriented, and there's a lot of strategy based battles against monsters from various worlds. I especially like how the author handles the existence of various worlds. Really clean stuff.. five stars from me!
The author and I have beef from their last novel where they had very wanton treatment towards women; I am hoping this novel does not continue that theme and I will update this as I finish the recent chapters~
a good novel ruined by smut i was actually expecting quality writing and great world building but was completely ruined by adding smut into it
Why does this keep happening, I'm enjoying a novel finally, and then boom, stupid shit I just finished the chapter where he's mother convinced him to let the older sister back, like seriously stop being a bleeding heart, I understand the writer portrays the mother as a good person and loving mother, but seriously after everything thats mentioned that happened with her, and because of his mother he just keeps accepting everything, like really she loves her family but he is her son, and she is so worried about everyone else and keeps causing him turmoil thats not thinking of him at all, after everything he has done for her and the family, its absolutely sickening, honestly I would have just walked away, and told her to deal with it herself and I wouldn't be getting involved, don't contact me till she's gone, and I have done it before with my mother because of my younger brother, as much as I love her, im not going to put up with that shit
Spoileri Göster~minor spoiler discussing a point in an early chapter~ I haven't gotten too far but i'm liking it a lot, i'm looking forward to the rest, and i've already favourited your other works so I have more quality content to read while you continue to work on this one. The one thing i'll say, and i mean this as genuine advice both as an avid reader and someone who used to edit professionally: read your sentences out loud to yourself, let your voice naturally inflect with the punctuation you use and then decide if you need an exclaimation point. I understand that you're going for fast paced and action packed, but exclaimation points are used quite sparingly in most works for a reason, and that is generally because if you use them a lot it throws off the tone and warps the voice of the narrator. It might be better to use words that reflect the pacing or the intensity. For example, i'm currently at the part where he is fighting the boss wolf, and instead of exclaimation points, you could say something like "quickly realizing that the black wolf was attempting to crush the second rank two, he desperately shouted mentally 'Let go!' with barely a moment to spare" here an exclaimation mark works because he's literally shouting, but shifts the narrative voice to an objective observer without sacrificing the tone of a fast paced combat sequence or making the reader feel rushed even though you're being more descriptive. That said, i'm not complaining, I am really enjoying the work and its nice to find quality that you know isnt going to devolve into annoying AI generated loops in 100 chapters from an author who clearly enjoys what he does. I hope I didn't come across as complaining because i'm definitely not meaning it that way. I just thought I would offer some advice, take it, or leave it.
Spoileri Göster32 or so free chapters for this novel so it’s difficult to determine where this novel is headed… Be aware that review below will contain spoilers Author uses a grade based system, no levels or numbers. Absorbs 10% or his summons power to boost him self. Based on what was written in the few free chapters, he will be another melee focused necromancer, don’t hope for flashy spells. Plot holes aplenty, “dungeon” gates are regulated by the government, however mc is going at it solo for now. Implied that unauthorized access is punishable. When asked, refused to disclose he is a necromancer. So I am uncertain how he’s going to gain access to dungeons if he has to work with a guild… With that said, will drop this for now. The limited free chapters did nothing to hook me in. Will revisit this review if this ever hits a free weekend.
Spoileri GösterEverything is nice from your previous novel to this novel , only thing I don't like that normal people get to criticize superhuman being . I can't understand some authors way of writing when MC is ordinary Awakener are bullying him when MC is powerful Awakener than ordinary people are bullying him by rules
Yo, someone take this man's exclamation key away. I only read up to the free chapters. The story definitely had a lot of potentiontal, but there were too many annoying things already going on. I won't be paying for any more chapters. First of all, I didn't realize I had such a problem with exclamation points before. But, when they are used to end 80% of sentences, I guess it's possible to get annoying. Seriously, it's nuts. MC's attitude also kinda sucks. I get it, he's supposed to be some kind of hardass that doesn't care about anything but family, but dude seems like one of those Monster Energy guys that punches through his drywall because someone mentioned some mundane topic he doesn't like. Third, he got way too powerful too fast. You're telling me all of a sudden he's stronger than 90%+ of superhumans after a couple of hours? He gains way too many stats per subordinate, especially for the lowest rank ones. At this pace, how the hell did the story even get to 300+ chapters? Dude should practically be a God after 10 more days of gate diving. Next, one trope I know a ton of us hate, he's hiding his powers. Surprise! Dude's legion had a tough time beating the boss, but somehow the government believes he defeated it with just a knife and some good vision. Alright...
I really liked this one. It has a lot of tropes but they are done quite well. Characters aren’t flat. Even the summons seem to have personality. The lemon scenes are done well too. Nice to have a author who seems to actually have been in a real relationship instead of the virgin fantasy we usually see.
This is a good story. Keep up the good work,but would like to request you to keep those occasional R-18 chapters comming they keep it interesting .
everything is nice but why you put school scenerio , if it was superhuman academy than it make sense but no mc have to get some god damn degree
Bro I was your fan since starting of superhuman system , I had not read this novel but suppose this will be equally entertaining
The latest novel by the author was a certified banger, and I will shamelessly give a 5 🌟 review 🥱 If the last one was so good, how can a newer one with more writing experience be short of a masterpiece?
promising start.like the nod to chess with the subordinates list.could be a good story,so far so good.
this series reminds me of solo leveling but I would say it's way better written then solo leveling
Love the story, it's characters and world building so far. Looking forward to how our MC will become strong
Yazar Legioneer_1000
Since author deleted my first review, let me try again. The book is basic. The tropes have been played out. MC is typical 'badass' and honestly, the book does nothing to really jump out at you. Now, on the other hand, the authors other book, The Strongest Demigod, was by far one of the most unique, thrilling things I've read on this platform. The pacing was excellent, and the leveling system was incredibly unique. That book is 10x better than this. It really shows the authors true colors when he will go through lengths to delete reviews and drop entire books whenever something doesn't go his way. Who knows, he might suddenly drop this book too at a moments notice.