Harry Potter: Multiversal Merchant

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toshisero

more than half of every chapter is yapping about things that don't add anything to the story in general.

LV 4

nightsking18

Story just started so for now gave everything 5, but having read authors other books and seeing an upwards trend in his quality in time I am sure this is a banger as the concept itself is already verry interesting to read.

LV 5

Mubashir_Ali_7087

The fanfic until now is good. The original character is decently written.However, frequent chapter updates are needed.

LV 4

BindgeBindge

It's a typical SI with the typical flaws. Mc just gets what he wants with little effort and the transactions aren't well thought out; so is the system. The repercussions of the second world is insane and would canonically destroy his world. His system has no real development and little real development story wise. It's a generic stat and skill panel that has an expanded shop feature; that's it. Not really a merchant system besides weak interactions with the people he's basically giving huge favors for with no bargaining. He basically just gets rewarded instead of any haggling whatsoever.

LV 4

Veldaza

Me when ioskro makes a new fanfic. ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

LV 4

The_Dark_Hydrax

Will there be any romance? A Single female lead?

LV 14

Dasavar

Loving the story so far, came over from the authors almost superb pokemon story and greatly enjoying the writing style and ideas. Ate through all the chapters and am now sadly waiting for more.

LV 15

IronDragon

I loved the author's previous hp fanfic so I have high hopes for this one.

LV 15

Vantas

Looks good so far, looking forward to more chapters, I’ll send some stones as long as it’s updated regularly 😊

LV 4

B3VR

It's interesting but chapter length is lacking, he only just got done with the first night at Hogwarts and it's chapter 40. I can hardly remember earlier chapters because they contained barely any information that actually meant anything to the story that couldn't have been mentioned in a single chapter and it has been 2 months since then. It's a good story I'll admit but the chapter length is dragging it down severely.

LV 3

Rebekah_Willey

Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

LV 3

Rebekah_Willey

Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

LV 3

Rengoku_0

Read till chap 26 absolutely interesting concept. Writing is good and continous . Mr. Author I want Ginny weaselyxAlaric Other then that YOU should post more and faster

LV 3

Axol8VIt5F

Buen día bien estructurado lo único malo es que no lo actualiza seguido actualizaciones muuuuuuuyyyy le tas ya que en su patreaon está más adelantada pero no tiene ninguna historia disponible para nosotros los umildes que no tengo dinero xd,dejando eso es muyyyyyy buena historia y es uno de los fanfic que metieron el mundo de one piece y espero que comerse con otros mundos de anime de magia como soso no friere y calavoso y tragonos

LV 2

Rillakuma_Rila

5 stars so far new gem found hope it won’t stop releasing chapters though I mean there’s too many hp fanfics but no substance hope this will not disappoint the readers

LV 15

DragonSkull27

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LV 10

Daoist_Dan

Story has some bumps (Explains unnecessary things. The mc's bravery is inconsistent. Some other minor things.) but I'm interested to find out where it's going. With one trade he already has a devil fruit ready to sell in other universes. If the story does more stuff like that it's going to be fun. 4, 5, 3, 3, 5

LV 15

Skritt_Master

I see you have learned your lesson from the ringmaker.

LV 14

Lily_Bwahahahaha

Great start, looking like it’s going to be a great story. Can’t wait to see how it develops.