The following are some of the main points of appreciation for the excellent fourth-grade elementary school essays: * * 1. Write a personal essay ** 1. * * Character Appearance Description ** - When describing the appearance of a character, one must grasp the main characteristics of the character. For example, his cousin was described as "chubby, with a small face like a ripe apple, round, big ears, and white and tender skin." Through these descriptions, a cute child image appeared on the paper. 2. * * Character Depictions ** - You can use specific examples to show the character's personality. For example, when he described his cousin, he described how "I" cheated him of something, and when he found out, he told "my" mother to get it back, as well as how he ate watermelon. These examples all showed his innocent and cute, sometimes a little willful personality. * * 2. Narrated Essay ** 1. * * Event Completeness ** - A good narrative essay had to have all six elements. For example, in a story about making lucky money, there is a time (one day), a place (Not explicitly mentioned but can be speculated to be family), character ("me "and sister), event (" I" helped my sister clean up the house to earn 1 yuan in order to experience the difficulty of making money), cause ("I "felt uneasy after taking 1 yuan from the red pocket money and wanted to earn 1 yuan myself), process (I wanted to give up halfway through cleaning the house but persevered for the sake of the salary), result (" I" got 1 yuan and understood the truth that it was easier to spend money than to earn money). 2. * * Psychological Description ** - Adding psychological descriptions in the narrative process can make the article more vivid. For example, when doing homework and encountering a problem, the first thought was "don't do it without deducting points, put down the pen and play", then remember the teacher's words and insist on doing the problem, and when his mother advised him to rest, he had the mental activity of "do today's things today". This kind of description allows the reader to better understand the character's behavior and motivation. * * 3. Scenery Writing ** 1. * * Description of the sequence of scenery ** - If he were to write about a scenery like the sea, he could describe it in a temporal or spatial order. When describing the sea in the morning, first write about the calm sea, then write about the scene after the sun comes out, and the feeling after the slight waves hit, so that the article is clear. 2. * * Emotions merge ** - When describing the scenery, he would incorporate his own emotions. For example, when describing the sea, he not only wrote the melancholy side of the sea, but also wrote that the sea was a place where people could go when they were troubled, a paradise, which made the image of the sea more rich and three-dimensional. * * 4. Lyrical composition (such as reminiscing about primary school)** 1. * * True feelings expressed ** - When he expressed his reluctance to part with his primary school days, it was like,"Six years passed slowly like bubbles. There were too many unforgettable memories in this alma mater that made me grow up and mature." He directly expressed his nostalgia for his primary school days and his feelings for his alma mater. 2. * * Memories and examples support ** - Through recalling the principles he learned in primary school, such as "knowing how to help others, knowing that unity is strength, knowing to respect the old and love the young" and other examples, he further explained the unforgettable time in primary school and its importance to his growth. Read more exciting novels for free
" Third-year Thrifty and Frugal Essay." In this happy society, where there are plenty of things, the sense of thrift is often neglected. But in reality, our country does not have sufficient resources. For example, toilet paper was excessively wasted, but the coverage of trees in our country was low, and there were many deserts. The reduction of trees also caused smog. At the same time, China's mines were only enough for 30 years, and the per capital mines were far lower than the world average. Even Xi'an began to lack water. Regardless of whether they were rich or poor, high or low, they should save resources and live in harmony with nature to create a better tomorrow for future generations. I learned a lot of family stories from " A Good Family Style in a New Era." Although I didn't know the meaning of family style, my parents 'behavior made me understand a lot. The first time I bought a collection book, my mother asked me to choose a practical book instead of a good-looking one. This is the family style of my family. I hope it can be passed down from generation to generation, because family style is positive energy, and everyone should start from themselves to carry forward the national spirit. Diligence and thrift is a traditional Chinese virtue. I was taught by my parents not to be wasteful since I was young. I keep my pocket money in my piggy bank and never spend it recklessly. When I save up, I buy school supplies. There was once a guest at home, and his father bought beer to entertain him. After dinner, I collected the empty wine bottles, along with the usual milk boxes, beverage bottles, old newspapers, and cardboard boxes, and sold them to the waste collection station for 3.80 yuan. I was very happy and prepared to save the money to buy gifts for Grandpa or donate to people in need. In this way, they could get money, clean up the house, and protect the environment. It was killing three birds with one stone. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>
Here are some examples of third-year narrative essays: ** My After-School Life ** My after-school life is rich and colorful, such as playing table tennis, practicing calligraphy, skating, reading and so on are my after-school activities, but I love skating the most. One summer night, Dad took me to the ice-skating rink. I was very happy. When they arrived at the skating rink, there were many people there. When I skated, I saw some people skating as fast as a bird flying, some people running around like a pony, and some people were like acrobatics stars who kept changing their patterns. Dad and I also started to slide. My skills were not good, so I slid slowly. Dad was very confident and slid very fast. When crossing the bend, Dad lost his footing and fell, but he still didn't give up and continued to slide. This spirit is worth learning. Skating has enriched my after-school life and brought me happiness and confidence. I really like skating. ** Mountain Climbing Journey ** One day during the summer vacation, Dad took Mom and I to climb Dazhai Mountain. It was a cloudless day, so we set off early, just as the sun rose. At the foot of the mountain, the mountain looked very high. I couldn't even see the road. Dad said to climb up the rocks, and we climbed carefully because the road was steep and steep. Mom and Dad asked me to be the team leader to lead them forward. I climbed up excitedly. After climbing for a while, we were panting and tired, so we found a rock to rest. Looking down from the mountain, the houses in the village became very small, the cars on the road were like small ants, and the mountains in the distance stretched to the horizon. After a break, we continued to climb and finally reached the top of the mountain at noon. After lunch, we had a lot of beautiful scenery. Among them, the three mountain streams were especially spectacular. The four peaks were steep and surrounded by cliffs, forming three very deep mountain streams. In the afternoon, I went down the mountain facing the setting sun. I wasn't tired at all under the red sunset. The beautiful scenery of Dazhai Mountain made me linger. ** About Mother ** If my mother was a big tree, I would like to add a little green to her; if my mother was a bouquet of flowers, I would like to offer her a trace of fragrance; if my mother was a blue sky, I would like to become a cloud for her. When I saw my mother's thin body by chance, I realized that she had sacrificed too much for me. His mother's face was much paler, and her movements were slower. Her terrifying white hair gradually swallowed her black hair, and the wrinkles on her forehead deepened. That morning, her mother said that she had found a job and that it was not far from home. When I came home from school in the afternoon, I saw her lying on the sofa as if she was asleep. Her hair was covered in dust and she looked very tired. Under the dim light at night, she squinted her eyes and massaged her legs. I thought she must be very tired from her work. I covered my mouth and didn't dare to make a sound. My nose was sore and tears filled my eyes. I still remember when I cut myself barefooted and the blood kept flowing… ** Guess Who She Is ** She had a pair of watery eyes, curved eyebrows, a round little face, and a lot of hair that hung down like silk. She was almost nine years old. She loved to be angry. If you accidentally provoked her, she would stare at you with angry eyes as if she wanted to eat you up. She liked to run, and she was as fast as an arrow during the physical education class. She overtook one student after another and finally won first place. She also loved reading. Once, when a friend came to play, she was still reading seriously. When her friend saw her uncle reading the newspaper and wanted to read, she immediately told her mother that she wanted to go back and read. After her mother agreed, she immediately ran back. That girl was me, a child who was about to enter third grade in September. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>
The following is a place recommended by a fourth-grade elementary school essay (taking the park as an example): Beautiful Park In the city where I live, there is a place that is like a fairyland. That is the park. It is a good place for people to relax. The first thing that came into view when they entered the park was a huge flower bed. There were all kinds of flowers blooming in the flower bed. They were red like fire, pink like rosy clouds, and white like snow. They swayed gently in the breeze, as if they were waving at people. These flowers had different shapes. Some had layers of petals, like delicate cakes, while others had long and thin petals, like the skirt of a fairy. Bees and butterflies were busy shuttling through the flowers. They danced and played among the flowers, adding a lot of vitality to the flower bed. They walked along the path beside the flower bed and arrived at the lake in the park. The lake water was crystal clear, like a huge mirror. The sand and rocks at the bottom of the lake and the small fish swimming around could be seen clearly. The fish swam freely in the water. They were colorful, red, gold, black, and white. They sometimes gathered together as if they were in a meeting, and sometimes scattered as if they were playing hide-and-seek. There were a few lotus leaves floating on the surface of the lake, like small green umbrellas. Occasionally, there would be dragonflies standing on the lotus leaves, which reminded me of the poem,"The little lotus leaves only show their sharp corners, and there are dragonflies standing on them." On the other side of the lake was a dense forest. There were all kinds of trees in the forest. There were tall and straight pine trees with branches and leaves like green needles; there were luxuriant Camphor trees with crowns like huge umbrellas that blocked the sun for people; there were also graceful willow trees with branches like green ribbons that danced in the wind. The birds in the forest sang happily. Their voices were crisp and pleasant, as if they were playing a grand concert. At the end of the park was a wide lawn. The lawn was like a huge green carpet, soft and comfortable to step on. People had picnics, flew kites, and played on the lawn. The children were laughing and playing on the lawn. Their laughter echoed in the air and filled the entire park. The park was full of charm, whether it was the flower beds in full bloom, the crystal clear lake, the dense forest, or the wide lawn. It was like a bright pearl embedded in the center of the city, attracting people to come and play. If he wanted to recommend other places, he could follow this line of thought. First, determine the place to recommend, such as an amusement park, bookstore, etc., and then capture the characteristics of the place to describe in detail, such as the exciting amusement facilities in the amusement park, the quiet atmosphere in the bookstore, and the rich collection of books. And organize the content according to a certain order, such as spatial order or tour order, so that you can write a good essay.
The following is a sample essay from a second grade elementary school essay, My Hometown: ** My Hometown ** My hometown is in Guangdong, a coastal city. The scenery here was beautiful and the products were rich. Take the seaside park for example. It was really beautiful. There was a lush green grassland, a flower bed filled with flowers, and tall coconut trees. Standing on the embankment, he looked at the sea. Red-mouthed gulls were flying on the white beach, and there were warships, fishing boats, and speedboats on the sea. The sea breeze was very comfortable. The seafood in his hometown was especially famous, such as fish, prawns, crabs, abalones, etc. There were many varieties, and everyone who had eaten them said that they were good. Moreover, because the environment was good and the seawater was not polluted, the seafood here was better than other places. There were also many fruits, such as bananas, watermelons, and pineapples. Red heart oranges and red star fruits were even more famous. I love my beautiful and rich hometown. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is by the ancient canal in the northern suburbs of Hangzhou. It is called Tangqi. The ancient canal divided the ancient town into two parts, north and south. In the past, people traveled between the two shores by boat. Later, someone built a stone arch bridge called "Guangji Bridge". The bridge had five arched bridge holes, and there was a dragon carved on each side of the fence. There were more than a hundred stone steps, and walking from the south bank to the north bank would make one's legs sore. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is in the beautiful Zhoushan. The scenery here was pleasant and the air was fresh. There was the Sea Heaven Buddhist Kingdom, Mount Putuo, the Blue Sea Golden Sands Zhujiajian, the China fishing capital, Shenjiamen, and the Shangri-La Peach Blossom Island. The sand in Zhujiajian was golden, like a carpet. The sea stretched as far as the eye could see. The sea and the sky were blue, and the connection between the sea and the sky was spectacular. There was a sand sculpture festival here every year. The sand sculptures were lifelike and attracted many Chinese and foreign tourists. His hometown was rich in local specialties, mainly seafood, such as small yellow croakers, prawns, crabs, etc., which could make people eat a lot. I love my hometown. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is in Anlu City, Xiaogan District, Hubei Province. The soil and water here were good, and the products were rich. The specialty was gingko. The ginkgo leaves could be made into blood pressure tea and ginkgo health pillows, and the fruits could be used as supplements. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is in Meishan, Sichuan Province. There is Sansu Park there. It is Su Dongpo's hometown. Now many people go there to visit. Our hometown has traditional delicacies such as sesame cake, Dongpo pig knuckle, Dongpo fish, longan cake, sweet duck, etc. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is a beautiful place. The trees are lush and the flowers are fragrant. In spring, flowers bloomed, butterflies and bees gathered honey, and little swallows flew back from the south. In the summer, the sun was shining brightly. People went to the swimming pool in the park to swim. The lotus flowers in the lake bloomed, and they were pink like lotus lanterns. In autumn, the autumn wind was cool. Maple leaves fell, fruits ripened, and farmers were busy harvesting. In winter, the north wind whistled and snow fell. The children had snowball fights in the garden, made snowmen, and skated. I loved my hometown very much. ** My Hometown ** My hometown is in Rui An. The scenery there is beautiful and pleasant. There was the Nine Pearl Pool, Tongxi, Shengjing Mountain, and Golden Rooster Mountain.
Since there was no essay specifically for fourth-grade primary school puppies, the following is an example of a post-reading essay written according to the relevant puppy essay: " Thoughts on Reading Puppy's Essay." After reading many fourth-grade elementary school essays about puppies, his heart was filled with warmth and gratitude. These essays were like small windows, allowing us to see the important role of puppies in children's lives. From these essays, one could deeply feel the cuteness and loyalty of the puppies. The cuteness of puppies was not only reflected in their furry appearance, smart eyes, or wagging tails, but also in their unique behavior and interaction with their young masters. For example, some puppies could not wait to ask for attention when their young master was playing on the computer, or they would cleverly remind their young master when they forgot to go home. Their loyalty was even more touching. Whether it was waiting for their little master's return in the wind and rain or trying their best to seek help when their little master was injured, they all showed this pure emotion. These puppies were no longer simple animals in the children's pen, but emotional friends. This also made us realize that animals are wonderful companions in human life. We should cherish our fate with them and treat these cute and loyal little lives with our hearts. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>
My Family My family is like a colorful little "zoo". Everyone has their own unique "animal" characteristics. My father is like a diligent old cow. Every morning, before the first ray of sunlight had completely lit up the room, his father had already gotten up to prepare for the day's work. He had always silently shouldered the financial burden of his family without any complaints. He took his work seriously and responsibly, like an old bull plowing the land, taking one step at a time. Dad usually doesn't talk much, but his love for us is reflected in his actions. He would repair the damaged furniture for us after work and would take us to the suburbs to play on weekends. His figure always gave us a sense of security. My mother was like a changeable chameleon. Sometimes, she was as gentle as the spring breeze. When I made progress in my studies or performed well in life, she would praise me with a gentle voice. Her face was filled with a gratified smile, which was as beautiful as a blooming flower in spring. However, when I made a mistake, she would become strict, like an angry chameleon, her eyes were serious, and she would criticize me severely and make me realize my mistakes. However, I know that this is also the way she loves me. She hopes that I can become a responsible person. My little brother is like a naughty little monkey. He was always full of energy, jumping around the house as if he had endless energy. He was filled with curiosity about everything around him, just like a little monkey who was full of curiosity to explore new things. Once, he saw the socket on the wall and wanted to poke it with his little finger out of curiosity. Fortunately, he was discovered in time, or it would have been dangerous. He often threw his toys everywhere, making the house look like a "battlefield," but his cute appearance made people unable to bear to blame him. As for me, I feel like a diligent little bee. In my studies, I always work hard, just like a little bee collecting honey, constantly absorbing the nutrients of knowledge. Every day, I would complete my homework seriously and read all kinds of books to enrich my knowledge. In life, I will also take the initiative to help my family do some housework, such as sweeping the floor, wiping the table, etc. I love my little "zoo" like home that is full of laughter and love. My family is the cutest people in the world. They protect me in their own ways and accompany me as I grow up.
The second volume of the handwritten version of the fourth-grade elementary school essay might involve the content of the unit synchronization essay. There were different unit topics in the fourth grade's second volume of the essay. For example, the second unit," My Wonderful Thoughts," could be written with a comparison, suspense, future, parallel, and explanation. Another example was Unit 6," I've Learned___", which had some writing points. Firstly, the selection of materials had to be outstanding. Considering the difficulty, steps, uniqueness, and other factors, the topic had to be as detailed as possible. Secondly, he could write down two or three failures in the middle, and write down the failure process in detail. Third, every step had to have an action and a result, and the thoughts in his heart after the result was produced. In addition, there were some essays that involved describing specific scenes such as one's own paradise, and there were corresponding model essays for reference. These contents could help students learn the fourth grade essay writing by organizing handwritten notes. <a href="/?from=ask_words" style="color:red" target="_blank">Read more exciting novels for free</a>
The following is an example of an excellent 400-word essay from the fourth grade of primary school: My Little Friend I have a special little friend. His name is Xiao Ming. He was not tall, but his thin body was full of vitality. His hair was always messy, like a bird's nest, and his big eyes were full of intelligence. Xiao Ming was a person who loved sports very much. He always actively participated in every school sports meet. He remembered the running competition at the last sports meet. He stood on the track and looked ahead with a determined gaze. With a gunshot, he shot out like an arrow. His steps were light and powerful, and his arms swung quickly. However, halfway through, he accidentally tripped over a small stone and scraped his knee. We all thought he would give up the game, but he gritted his teeth and quickly got up to continue running. His expression was distorted by the pain, but his footsteps did not slow down. In the end, he insisted on running the entire race. Although he did not get first place, his strong perseverance won everyone's applause. He was also a warm-hearted person. Once, I encountered a difficult problem while doing my math homework. I couldn't figure it out no matter how hard I tried. Xiao Ming saw my sad face and took the initiative to ask me what was wrong. After I told him about the problem, he patiently explained the solution to me and guided me step by step until I completely understood it. This is my little friend, Xiao Ming. He is full of energy, strong, and enthusiastic. He is a good example for me to learn from.
The following is an excellent example of a fourth-grade essay, My Day: My Day In the early morning, the sunlight shone on my face through the gaps in the curtains, like a gentle hand gently waking me up from my sleep. I stretched and got up to wash up. The fresh air filled the room, making me feel refreshed. Breakfast is my favorite fried eggs and milk. While eating my delicious breakfast, I looked out of the window. Birds were singing happily on the branches, as if they were playing a symphony in the morning. After breakfast, I began to do my summer homework. When I encountered a difficult problem, I didn't give up easily. Instead, I seriously thought about it and constantly tried various methods. After working hard, I finally solved the problem. That sense of accomplishment was like conquering a mountain. At noon, her mother made a table full of sumptuous dishes. My family and I sat together, enjoying the delicious food while sharing the interesting things that happened in the morning. Cheers and laughter echoed in the dining room. The weather was a little hot in the afternoon. I chose to stay in my room and read an interesting storybook. The story in the book attracted me like a magnet. I was immersed in the world of words, taking risks with the protagonists, feeling their emotions. In the evening, the sun was setting. My friends and I went to the garden of the community to play. We jumped rope and played hide-and-seek together, and laughter and shouts rose and fell in the garden. Sweat soaked my clothes, but I was so happy. At night, I lay in bed and looked back at this fulfilling and beautiful day. The moonlight shone on my bed through the window, covering me with a silver blanket. In this peaceful atmosphere, I gradually fell asleep. This is my day, filled with joy, learning, and growth.
My Family In my family, every member is like a unique star in the night sky, emitting their own light. My mother was a loving and strict person. She had a well-proportioned figure, long hair, a round face, and a pair of glasses. She looked elegant and intellectual. She had a great passion for online shopping. As long as it was something online, whether it was daily necessities or my clothes and toys, she would buy them home. This characteristic often surprised me. However, she was very strict with my studies. Whenever I didn't do my homework well because of carelessness, she would patiently correct me and sometimes punish me not to watch TV. She also had high expectations for my handwriting. She could always accurately point out the shortcomings, such as whether I wrote it straight or not. Although I am sometimes impatient, I know that this is her love for me and hopes that I can become better. My sister was a third-year student. She was 15 years old, tall and thin. She had short black hair and a pair of big eyes under her curved eyebrows. Her sister was a complete fan of books. She had read all kinds of books, such as Red Rock, Charles IX, and 5000 Years of China. Her love for books had reached the point of obsession. Whenever she had time, she would read. She would read books before eating, before sleeping, and when she went to the toilet. There was even one time when she bumped into a wall while reading and almost got injured. Under her influence, I gradually fell in love with studying. My sister has a dream of getting into her ideal university. I sincerely hope that her dream will come true. My sister is just over a year old and is currently in kindergarten. She had black hair, a round face, a pair of super big eyes, and a small red mouth. She was very lovable. She especially loved to eat the beans sold in the shop. When she ate, she would grab them with her small hands. Even if they fell to the ground, she would not mind picking them up and eating them. She looked extremely cute. Once, when I was lying on the ground teasing her, she also lay down. After I stood up, she was still lying on the ground. When I picked her up, she cried and wanted to lie down. It was really naughty and interesting. Everyone in my family has their own unique side. They use their own ways to express their love for my family and me. I love my family.