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[Dropped] (Going to be rework)
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Ray is famed as the #1 player in Arcana Online, a popular VRMMORPG game that has more than 2 Billion players. As a dead person he plays the game like its his life. One day when logging in, he find himself inside a gigantic castle
"Wait.... why did I spawn as a baby? Bug?" (Ray)
"I can't I log out!??" (Ray)
"Huh?! who are you? and how can you talk in my head"
"This voice... Leila?" (Ray)
"What!! Are you Rey?" (Leila)
To think that im reborn in the game and of all people im reborn with the #2 rank player.
"F*ck! Isn't this your typical cliche stories?" (Ray)
Author note:
This is my first novel, im sorry if my grammar is bad as this is not my first language.
This is a novel I wrote for my own entertainment im not expecting any reader, but if people start to read this novel I'll fix the quality.
Note: I'll probably fix these chapters later in the future. (To be exact chapter 1~17 needed to be fix, and 18~23 needed a little adjustment as for chapter 24~33 I'm not not experienced enough to fix cause I didn't see any thing I did wrong. This probably would change the more experience I get as a writer so please bare with my bad grammar)
Art is not mine... If the drawer some how saw this and want to take the picture down msg me.
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Here is the link to the novel newer version, The update will probably be slower after reaching the latest chapter from the old version, around 1~2/ weeks depending on my mood and school work. [Link is in the comment]
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The novel is good, but I think the author need to fix some of the beginning chapter. I could see that in the later chapter the writing quality improved quite a bit but its still need improvement. Overall aside form the writing, the story is had a lot of potentials and the world building is also vast creating a lot of room for the story to go a solid 4/5 form me
similar to ending maker but has a broader world background please don't rush it like what happened in ending maker . llllllllllllĺllllllll
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This is one of the most amazing light novels I've read it had my entire attention from beginning to the end of the first arc I'm looking forward to it's continuation and can't wait for more
This story will be rework at some point in the future, basically I will change the story to make it less cringy and have more consistent world view. I will be writing a new one in the future when I'm free.