[Moved to Fanfic Section] {Is on Rewrite...}

As you or may not know this is my first time writing a novel and just a way to spend my free time. I'm also trying my best to fix my grammar and sentences. This is also a way for me to improve my writings. And im also gonna try to make it as interesting as possible for other people to enjoy.
Just so you know I'll accept bad comments and criticism but do be sure to give a valid reason and while you're at it point out you're discontent in this story