/ Fantasy / 読まない
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as a big fan of the reincarnation/system genre this book gives me the feeling of a future favorite with each chapter making you want to read the rest, I can't wait for how things turn out at then.
The description's introduction touched my heart. I cherished each syllable. You put it up in a distinctive manner. I like it. carry on You have imagination, a unique idea, and a feature, dear. I mean it. It's impressive and appealing to me how you planned the narrative, the dialogue, and everything else. It is definitely worth it, therefore I added it right away to my library.
First of all, before I say anything, the guy called Mu Fan is a professional troll. Now for the review: Writting quality seems rushed, there were several beginings of sentences not being capitalized and punctuations missing, fortunately, this can easily be corrected with the proper proofreading. Update stability has been progressing well, the author posts chapters frequently, hopefully he keeps it up and doesn’t bait up with mass releases. 🙂 Story development is also good for what it is. Plot is pretty cliché, but cliché isn’t always bad. Additionally, scenes can be a bit predictable but nothing too bad. Character designs is a 50/50 for me tbh, most of the characters are cringe. Mc is pretty average also, so far my favorite character is the teacher, Ms. Su. (I think that’s her name) World background is decent and easy to picture. Takes place in a modern era with gates and hunter, etc. There are guilds and there is a ranking system, which I’m sure everyone will be familiar with. All in all a decent story with the right amount of proofreading and unrushed chapter’s. A solid 4.4/5 for me.
Give me both sole leveling vibes and warlock of the magus world vibes but with a slice of life feeling
the synopsis was very good..since I was a real fan of adventure I read your book. it's fun but I just needed something more to keep me hooked. great work!
The depiction of the world's backgrounds is fascinating, but some writing techniques could be improved. The story line made me want to get to know this novel more deeply. Keep your spirit up! Good luck!
The novel is interesting where the description of characters and world background are well written and plot is nice and keep updating new chapters and writing quality is also good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
First of all, the novel was great, the author used many unique words and the story is as unique as the words and the world building was also great the name of the characters is at least better than most and the novel is very cool and realistic and if your not reading it already, you should read it too!
great story, nice plot and good direction has led me to ultimately add this in my library *presses the add button*
Hi, I love your story title, your book cover is super good, and the plot of your story is amazing and strong too. I'm addicted, I hope you complete your story. Best of luck.
Author here! if there are any questions regarding the novel ask them here I'll gladly answer.🙂