Exactly lol. I assume it’s just because the author wants to establish a close relationship between David, Rebecca, and V, making this some some sort of father, mother, daughter thing. Still can’t help but cringe at the unrealisticness though.
Rebecca cursed beneath her breath as she stormed into the basement.
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2
Interesting. Even you don’t understand why you made her cry.
After a few minutes of silence, she said quietly. ''If you tell anyone I cried over that, I'll ice you.''
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2
Again, not the way Rebecca would react to this situation. I can see her feeling bad for the girl, but crying? For real? She didn’t even cry when her brother died. I feel like you are creating scenes for a quick relationship boost between the two.
Hiccuping slightly as David pulled her forward, hugging her to his chest as he simply sat there beneath the hot water while holding her as she cried.
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2
Ngl this isn’t how Rebecca acts. Sure, she’s impulsive but definitely not like this.
What he didn't expect, was a naked Rebecca to join him, standing there with her fist clenched, her face a storm.
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2
Actually, you are the wrong one here.
I just lost interest in it for the time being. I plan on coming back around at some point.
ch 0 7 A Textbook of Pokémon
Anime & Comics · Month
As always, a very thorough and detailed review. I appreciate it.
A necessary plot instrument.
The Low-Born Maid II
Anime & Comics · Month
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 Reincarnation
Fantasy · Ghost_Worker
It’s not dropped. Dw
ch 61 [Bonus chapter] Accused (Part 2)
Fantasy · Month
No
[Aeternus Lacerta Hatchling: Eternal Lizard Hatchling. High agility, bites are venomous and the tail is dangerous. Usually found in The Crypt Pits and the first Stratum of the Great Aeternus Labyrinth]
Fantasy · Month
Yes.
ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited)
Fantasy · Month
Yeah. There's that & the fact that I have been taken off of the seasonal rankings for some unknown reason. I think this novel may have been lowkey shadowbanned. It’s one of the reasons I’m planning on releasing another novel soon. Just working out the rough edges since I want that story to be more put together than this one.
ch 59 Accused (Part 1) Re-edited)
Fantasy · Month
On my screen it says "he could hear". Webnovel is just glitched.
As he dug a hole big enough for him to fit into he could here the mumbles of the humans growing louder, this angered him even more than having to leave his cave.
Fantasy · Month
Alright. AU or not, this is simply not Rebecca. From this point on I’ll just read with no brain.
She pulled him down, leaning back against his car as she kissed him once more. This time it didn't have the fire from earlier at the range, it was softer and slower, it escalating into a full french kiss as she let David play with her tongue, his hands on her waist as he lifted her a bit, pressing her into the car.
Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
Anime & Comics · BeaulenSmith2