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A system that scammed people. Yeah! Give me more. If it’s done right, it could be a great story. Systems and rebirth two concepts that readers love. Good luck!
The beginning of the story could turn out into something exciting and powerful. A system that could change just everything in the present. Each chapter has a moving plot twist and interesting direction. Good job, author.
I must say that I haven't read a story like this ever in my life. Moreover, the writing is very neat, so I could enjoy the story smoothly. Looking forward to how the story will turn out!
Systems are generic but this one? I can assure you that this is out of the ordinary. The plot is amazing. The writing quality is perfect. The only thing I see flaw is its character description. I think it lacks but everyone has different opinions. That's all thank you author for this wonderful literature piece.
It's an interesting concept, what I love is the humorous storytelling of the author. Furthermore, this the first I have read a system that killed a ridiculous amount of host! I hope you continue the story ^^
The first few chapters are centered on the main character's fickle system, which can sometimes be comedic. The grammar quality is wholly acceptable and reads like a mix of a comic book and a novel. Can be interesting to see how it develops.
I love the idea about this novel that needs money to activate the system. The conversation between the system is light and fun at times. I will wait for more chapters! 😁