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  • Lost Grail System

    Lost Grail System

    Competitive Sports System

    4.2

    Xavier the nerd who was always bullied for being thin and, weak. He was a genius who ranked 1st in the National Achievement Examination of the United States of America. Despite being a genius and, a bookworm, he always dreamt of being one of the sports figure in the world but, he really can't because of his weak figure. One day, everything change when he bumped to someone then, the guy he bumped to dropped something. He picked it up and, attack his mind. "WHAT?! WHY AM I BACK AS A ONE YEAR OLD?" --------------------- Grail- a thing that is being earnestly pursued. --------------------- Thanks for the cover OmnipotentDad and credits to the sources.

  • Gaming Prince

    Gaming Prince

    Video Games

    Rin was known as the Crown Prince and a military trump card of the Corinne Empire. With his sword skill and unique bloodline, who would stand against him? When everything was going well and when kingdoms merged to one Empire, the Crown Prince was suddenly hit by a lightning. Brought by the mysterious lightning to a different world and with his never aging body, he lived through this world for around 300 years. When he was about to change his identity again, he found an interesting game. Bloodline - the first ever VR game was released and out of excitement paired with curiosity, he dived to the game. What awaits the Prince that games? -------------- Stable release will start on New Year's Eve. For now, I will release one chapter as a trailer. Credits to the source of the pictures.

  • System: Lost Grail

    System: Lost Grail

    Competitive Sports

    Xavier is known as one of the geniuses of his era. Despite being the son of the chairman, he was also appointed as the Vice President of the Zero group. His future is going well and already planned out. There was still something he wanted to do but, he can't -- playing sports. It was his lost dream to be one of the players on the top and to challenge people like Kobe Bryant or even Messi. Due to his frail body, he can't risk his life just to play. After his date, he brought Paula to her home. When he was near his car, a man bumped into him. He looked at the ground and saw a stone. The stone glowed as it brought him to the past. Would one do what it takes to walk the path towards one's lost grail? --------- Stable release will start on New Year's Eve. Once again, credits to the editor OmnipotentDad and to the source of the picture.

Moments

Reading Status: C10
It was her first try on this genre yet my interest was already piqued. The story is quite interesting as well. I wish to see the end of this novel as well as her other novels. View More
My Life or Your Memory
4 months ago
What? Have you heard of an atomic bomb? They saw the smoke from even kilometers away. Let's talk about physics. Of course the sounds of the swords clashing can be heard its not like there are only two people fighting there, it was an entire army. Also, the Imperial Palace is in the first half and the other part is the General's flashback way back its kingdom state. It was only a kingdom during the flashback. And yes, it's my mistake from not putting too much detail(because that world is not the focus so it was pretty rushed) and im sorry if you were confused. View More

RealShesmu: What? it's just a smoke, so you can see the smoke and not the battlefield? Isn't one on top of the other? I guess the wind could push it by few kilometers, but that doesn't seem to be that much in your world from what you wrote. Plus, you did talk about the sound of clashing swords, which tell me that they are pretty close. Well, I guess maybe sound doesn't work the same in your world and that waves don't lose energy and that physics doesn't work the same, even though that's the most retarded excuse ever because nothing you wrote tells me that. As for the thing about Rin being the one who rushed to the battlefield. He took a few minutes to reach the battlefield, talked with the countries' representatives and then turned into poule roti. Leo was there to see him use his bigoti bagoti poof magic. So what you're telling me is that Rin spent a long time talking or something? Like what the heck, that's the only way for Leo to have taken more than a "few minutes" whatever that means. But the discussion you described took like what, 30 seconds? From what you wrote, their speed is close to each other. Yes, Rin might be 20% to let's say 50% faster, still doesn't change the fact that they took way too little time to reach the battlefield. Plus, from what you wrote, everything happened to close to viewing distance from each other. The mountain is at viewing distance from the palace and the battlefield is at viewing distance from the mountain. These don't seem like countries to me but more like villages. This would have been okay if you did state that they were city-states or something and if you didn't use the adjective Imperial to describe the palace. Imperial is used for empires, not for countries, not for city-states.

One last thing, you seem to be really keen on talking about assumptions. Readers should assume things, they should assume that physics work the same in your world as long as its not stated otherwise, because if they don't then they would request you to confirm every single little detail. Does the wind push things? Does the sun create heat? Do people die in your world? Do people age? Are people born from their mother and not their father? Should I not assume any of that? As long as you didn't specify something, it's assumed to be like the real world. If not, stories would never work and would never be read or written. That's how things work.

Gaming Prince · C0
4 months ago
Hays. Again, don't assume that you know the world of the prince. A mountain can be viewed from afar even if it's a kilometer away. Yes, the general did took an hour for him to go to the mountain but it wasn't stated there that he took a few minutes to go to the battlefield. It was Rin who rushed to the battlefield. The battlefield is not even near their view from the mountain. It's just a smoke. I take constructive criticism but I can't take people criticizing things that they don't know about. Criticism needs to be clear and with proofs as far as I know, you're just assuming things. View More

RealShesmu: you seem to be taking criticism painfully personal. Let's not talk about the fact that your general needed an hour to reach a mountain that is in view range of the guards, but just a few minutes to reach the battlefield to witness the swag of his prince. For now, let's just talk about the fact that the smoke of the battlefield can be seen from the mountain of Obus. Here is the part where you show that the battlefield is in viewing range: "Leo rushed to the Prince who was walking towards the direction of the smoke and the sounds of swords clashing." Now, for your last thing about not reading if I don't want to read. There are five chapters and you stopped updating like 6 months ago, what is there even to read?

Gaming Prince · C0
4 months ago
Is this your story? Lol I cant find anything from the chapter that they used a horse. The two of them are high ranking officials of the kingdom, why would they be slow? You dont want to assume but you're assuming things about the world that you shouldn't. Currently in the story, the prince's world is still shrouded with mystery lol. If you don't want to read then dont. View More

RealShesmu: This is a world where they still use horses as a mean of transportation and where the most magical attack only encompass 10 meters. Why should I assume that your prince can reach Mach 2 from this information? Everything up to that point only led me to believe that magic isn't so strong in this world, why should I break that and assume things that shouldn't be assumed?

Gaming Prince · C0
4 months ago
the battlefield is not close to the palace. there's no phrases in this chapter to prove your accusation. "he moved towards the direction of the battlefield." they can move fast that's why lol. View More

RealShesmu: Also, in what world is the battlefield close to the palace. You would think that the country is smart enough to fight its enemies far from where the civilians reside. That way the war doesnt mess up normal ppl's daily life and hamper the economy. Also, in case of loss they will have more time to evacuate or fortify their defenses if the war is waged at the borders.

Gaming Prince · C0
5 months ago
well no. 10 meter radius is not enough yes but it doesn't mean it was the only attack he did lol. View More

RealShesmu: Also, wtf. Are kingdoms in this world tiny villages or something? How is killing everything in a 10 meter radius enough to change the course of a war? I thought that there were hundreds of thousands of soldiers, since there were multiple kingdoms and stuff. I didnt expect the whole thing to be just a thug battle between two streets..

Gaming Prince · C0
5 months ago
Im sorry for making you guys wait I think I can continue uploading again next week View More
System: Lost Grail · C0
5 months ago
There was a saying that there's no concept of time in a dream. View More

ChayceMT: I feel like he came to a realization way to quick, there was no pause whatsoever.

System: Lost Grail · C0
5 months ago

DlNO: Nice novel, read the trailer and was waiting for this to be released.
Overall, nice novel^^

When will you be updating the next novel?

First time writing a review.
Dont know what should I input haha.

System: Lost Grail
7 months ago
This is novel is undergoing redevelopment. I pulled it off and started it from scratch again. I published the first chapter in the novel named System: Lost Grail but, I don't know when I will finish it and release it, for I have many novels at hand. So, you can read the System: Lost Grail and the other novel named Gaming Prince. My writing skills have changed and it was evident in those two novels. View More

ImReallyTired: So, this novel has quite a lot of potential. But i believe that the plot development may be happening a little to fast. In 2 chapters he went from 1 years old to 12 years old. I believe that you should've elaborated more instead of zooming through the ages. Reason being is that this kinda loses the interest of readers since we have barely any information on how he grew his skills and other stuff. But its also bad to go too slow, as that can also lose interest for the readers. So you kinda need to find a middle ground. But this may be tough. In my opinion, the best way to find a middle ground is like elaborating for a certain amount of time/ages, then do a time skip. I have seen this done on many novels and it doesn't make me lose interest. Another thing is that the main character may be a little to shallow. He already found a lover in what.. his like second day of middle school? I believe that is a little too quick. You should've added some plot development to lead up to the main character falling in love with the female lead. Also another thing, the MC may be a little too powerful in the start. I know that everyone has their own opinions and such, but for me, if the MC is too powerful in the start, its makes me lose interest in the story itself, because how else is the MC going to grow if he's better than like most people? I prefer him learning a little more slowly, so then he has room to grow. Your word choices can also a bit confusing sometimes (but im not one to talk lmao). (I know i may be only on level 2, but trust me, i have read TONS of novels and mangas as well. I know what i find interesting and not) Anyways your story has a lot of room to grow and i hope to see more growth in your writing as well as the chapters continue on! Good Job!!!!

Lost Grail System
7 months ago

ImReallyTired: So, this novel has quite a lot of potential. But i believe that the plot development may be happening a little to fast. In 2 chapters he went from 1 years old to 12 years old. I believe that you should've elaborated more instead of zooming through the ages. Reason being is that this kinda loses the interest of readers since we have barely any information on how he grew his skills and other stuff. But its also bad to go too slow, as that can also lose interest for the readers. So you kinda need to find a middle ground. But this may be tough. In my opinion, the best way to find a middle ground is like elaborating for a certain amount of time/ages, then do a time skip. I have seen this done on many novels and it doesn't make me lose interest. Another thing is that the main character may be a little to shallow. He already found a lover in what.. his like second day of middle school? I believe that is a little too quick. You should've added some plot development to lead up to the main character falling in love with the female lead. Also another thing, the MC may be a little too powerful in the start. I know that everyone has their own opinions and such, but for me, if the MC is too powerful in the start, its makes me lose interest in the story itself, because how else is the MC going to grow if he's better than like most people? I prefer him learning a little more slowly, so then he has room to grow. Your word choices can also a bit confusing sometimes (but im not one to talk lmao). (I know i may be only on level 2, but trust me, i have read TONS of novels and mangas as well. I know what i find interesting and not) Anyways your story has a lot of room to grow and i hope to see more growth in your writing as well as the chapters continue on! Good Job!!!!

Lost Grail System
7 months ago
Hey I'm really sorry. School stuffs bombarded me, you know I'm a graduating student (High School). So, I'm trying my best to create chapters but it's quite impossible for the current me. On summer tho, I might. View More

dultinap2000: Am looking forward to that author
Am stalking ur profile 2👀👀

Lost Grail System · C0
8 months ago

dultinap2000: Am looking forward to that author
Am stalking ur profile 2👀👀

Lost Grail System · C0
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
Oh i didn't notice that thank you View More

sha1989: "There wasn't anyone who can't fight it single-handedly" Double negative, hm...
Do you mean its very easy to fight this thing?

Gaming Prince · C0
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
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Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Number One Dungeon Supplier · C1
8 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
9 months ago
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Reborn: Evolving From Nothing · C1
9 months ago
Mixed ideas View More

HighHeavens: Well, did you make this novel base on kuro no basuke?

Lost Grail System · C0
10 months ago

HighHeavens: Well, did you make this novel base on kuro no basuke?

Lost Grail System · C0
10 months ago
Reading Status: C12
Pretty nice story. The writing quality can improve because I believe in ya. Still, I'm giving these 5 star for the effort in trying to give entertainment to readers. I hope you continue your writing journey and don't be discourage along the way. Good luck and I hope I can see the end of this novel. View More
Thunderdome
10 months ago

Ghost9902: Thanks for the chapter.

Gaming Prince · C0
11 months ago

Zyxkun: Well for exp too.

Gaming Prince · C0
11 months ago

Zyxkun: Thanks!

Gaming Prince · C0
11 months ago

reo_01: Thanks for the chapter

Gaming Prince · C0
11 months ago
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