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hope this will go well nen alwys has potentianl but 100% is a lot and kinda of like kurapika --------------------------------------------------------------------
Good so far. I like his character and the writing is solid. I liked the intro also, the gods gameshow was unique. Looking forward to more chapters!
It was a great story until you started to use his Aura in ways that have already been used before, I was hoping for new and exiting ideas to use Nen, and I didn't like how you used Hatsu in a limited way, like making a sword out of it and other stuff especially without going into detail of how his hatsu worked or when he made it, and I was reallying hoping you would have made a minimum of 30 chapters before dropping it, but I feel you, I tried making a MHA story too and it didn't work out as I hoped, I had big plans for it but because of all the repeated and depressing MHA out there kinda just throw me off on where I was going to take it.
Gave score from memory, but what I really made this review for was to thank you for leaving the chapters up. I just had to delete five stories from my library because the authors decided to fully delete everything, and it's always really upsetting to see. Anyway I'm glad you left them up and will definitely be rereading the chapters later.
I would have liked to read that nen was on mhw but the first boot ended with at least 3 of the 5 wishes being trashed. When is this wish issue going to end anyway? I don't know, I stopped reading.
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Very good, and certainly worth following. The MC has cool abilities, and thankfully is written intelligently enough to make good use of nen. The author has passable grammar, and has set up a good stage for an interesting plot. I am looking forward to seeing our MC in action, though he is already quite OP and I hope the author does not nerf him somehow. One area for improvement, would be the authors ability to write more expressive characters with varying personalities and more “life” in them. However, that would be going above an beyond. I reccomend following this story, and I hope the author won’t drop it. Solid 8.4/10.
Story is out of place and having no sense. Also mc start telling everyone his power and how they work... yea not for me. I bet this will go 110% canon with extra character who has nen.