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man ... only with the last sentence of kratos there if you already have my absolute loyalty author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
Good. But the Grammer and Vocab needs work. A LOT of Work. The plot however is smooth and intresting. However the more crossovers he bring the more the plot got loose
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Amazing Plot, it does Justice because its AU random crossover, too bad it drop when the strory start a great twist,. there is no mistake if Alternate Universe,. Author no need to follow some MCU or X-Men real time line,. after all its Alternate Universe,.
NAME OF YOUR NEW FANFIC, YOU SAID GO NOW AND THERE IS NO NAME BRUH! NAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFIC
Loved the fact you tried to tie everything together and having him sleep for Thousands of years is better so you didnt have to worry about canon awsome job
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I'm just here again to post how I really liked this story and hope there will be a reboot(even if there were some grammatical and sentence structure errors). the story really felt rushed near the middle and could have been wrapped up better, but I still enjoyed it. the concept was interesting and could really make for a better story now that you've gotten a little more experience in writing. So do us, your fans, a favor and at least think about making a reboot.
Hai penulis, aku harus mengatakan bahwa pengembangan karakter nya cukup baik dan kesannya sangat baru. Walaupun MC terlihat bodoh dan naif, jika cerita ini terus dilanjutkan, aku yakin masih banyak pembaca yang menantikan. Semoga suatu hari penulis akan mencoba memperbaiki cerita dan melanjutkannya 💪
I really enjoyed this story. It was a very good read in my opinion. Author-sama should think about giving it another shot some time in the future(Like, make a Reboot or something along those lines).
There's a reason this novel was dropped. It started off good but went downhill really fast. It felt like the author was not really thinking about what he was writing and just writing. Mc is born as a half Asgardian. His mother is Hela and his dad is Hercules. I was looking forward to this because most Marvel fanfics don't have the MC being born as an Asgardian. They tend to be born as a Human with no relatives at all to hold them back. So I was looking forward to The MC being trained by Hela and reading about his adventures in becoming stronger. But sadly, that did not happen. While training he gets attacked by an unknown source and is teleported to space. He floats there unconscious for thousands of years. Till he wakes up, and the system he got teleports him to earth where the "Adventure" begins. So the MC at this point is only a bit stronger than an average human. He wonders why that is and the reason for it is because he got cursed by the Greek gods and Odin. Which reduced his stats by %150. But he did get blessings from his mother and Freya for a total of %160. So his stats are just %10 increase. I had it when they nerf characters. I'm okay with reading stories of someone being week, then becoming strong. But when they were strong, then nerfed down so that he has some sort of "Character progression" or to make the fights not so one-sided, is so dumb to me. At that point, my interest in this novel was at an all-time low. So I had to drop it. But I guess the Author knew he f-d up as well. So he dropped it just like I did.
I liked the problem and that the MC didn’t develop much and the author was getting lost writing something after he forgot about it, that’s why he gave up but I think the story would be very good if he did it right
the story had alot of mistakes, and it was hard to read sometimes, but the overall plot was interesting and the character was awesome, good representation of the main MCU characters and alot of potential story here, but my main problem is you put the story on [complete] instead of [dropped] and I don't like the crude labeling which made me start reading this story in the first place
enjoyable short story, with some misspelled words, but nothing that makes it unreadable. Nice if you want to check out authors writing style. sadly it's dropped, so you leave blueballed at the end...
Tbh this was the best story of your i have Read and the new one wasnt even close to it. Sed you left this. Well i am still reading you new story and waiting for good part to come.
I'm sad you're rewriting it was great. But the curse of all twelve olympians won't make sense in marvel because Athena, Aphrodite, Poseidon and Hades don't seem like they'll do something like that. If your rewriting you don't need to give him a system maybe just the grimoire with the weapons in it and have him discover his powers .And you can use 616 ultron and have him be a lurker on the Internet while Tony is creating a new ai
This was the greatest mess of a story I have ever read and I don't know why I like it. I hope the author rewrites it. Unfortunately the MCU was always a mess and adding DC does not help.
It is a great novel, and the characters were great. But why did you drop it... The story could have gone from so much longer because contains both The Avengers time line and the X-Men time line adding some awesome characters, powers and events.
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It's really a great novel with a good development and introducing characters and the heroine in a great way. But sadly it's dropped 😭😭😭😭
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great thanks so much for your time and consideration and I will be in the future of our games are based on the other day and I will be in the future of.
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Fun story, but writing is pretty bad..................................................................................................................
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I have enjoyed it so far. Thank you for your effort. Thank you Thank you Thank you Tank you Ttank yiu I wish I could write what I wanted to say.
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Well, this is the best marvel fanfic ever. Prove me wrong. I just hope there is a lot of chapters. And, MC to be OP. Well, Bela should be on good side. Odin should die. Zeus should be electrocuted. Posido should be drowned in sea, Hades should be banished to underworld .....
man ... only with the last sentence of kratos there if you already have my absolute loyalty author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
Good. But the Grammer and Vocab needs work. A LOT of Work. The plot however is smooth and intresting. However the more crossovers he bring the more the plot got loose
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Amazing Plot, it does Justice because its AU random crossover, too bad it drop when the strory start a great twist,. there is no mistake if Alternate Universe,. Author no need to follow some MCU or X-Men real time line,. after all its Alternate Universe,.
NAME OF YOUR NEW FANFIC, YOU SAID GO NOW AND THERE IS NO NAME BRUH! NAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFICNAME OF YOUR NEW FANFIC
Loved the fact you tried to tie everything together and having him sleep for Thousands of years is better so you didnt have to worry about canon awsome job
Reveal Spoiler I'm just here again to post how I really liked this story and hope there will be a reboot(even if there were some grammatical and sentence structure errors). the story really felt rushed near the middle and could have been wrapped up better, but I still enjoyed it. the concept was interesting and could really make for a better story now that you've gotten a little more experience in writing. So do us, your fans, a favor and at least think about making a reboot.
Hai penulis, aku harus mengatakan bahwa pengembangan karakter nya cukup baik dan kesannya sangat baru. Walaupun MC terlihat bodoh dan naif, jika cerita ini terus dilanjutkan, aku yakin masih banyak pembaca yang menantikan. Semoga suatu hari penulis akan mencoba memperbaiki cerita dan melanjutkannya 💪
I really enjoyed this story. It was a very good read in my opinion. Author-sama should think about giving it another shot some time in the future(Like, make a Reboot or something along those lines).
There's a reason this novel was dropped. It started off good but went downhill really fast. It felt like the author was not really thinking about what he was writing and just writing. Mc is born as a half Asgardian. His mother is Hela and his dad is Hercules. I was looking forward to this because most Marvel fanfics don't have the MC being born as an Asgardian. They tend to be born as a Human with no relatives at all to hold them back. So I was looking forward to The MC being trained by Hela and reading about his adventures in becoming stronger. But sadly, that did not happen. While training he gets attacked by an unknown source and is teleported to space. He floats there unconscious for thousands of years. Till he wakes up, and the system he got teleports him to earth where the "Adventure" begins. So the MC at this point is only a bit stronger than an average human. He wonders why that is and the reason for it is because he got cursed by the Greek gods and Odin. Which reduced his stats by %150. But he did get blessings from his mother and Freya for a total of %160. So his stats are just %10 increase. I had it when they nerf characters. I'm okay with reading stories of someone being week, then becoming strong. But when they were strong, then nerfed down so that he has some sort of "Character progression" or to make the fights not so one-sided, is so dumb to me. At that point, my interest in this novel was at an all-time low. So I had to drop it. But I guess the Author knew he f-d up as well. So he dropped it just like I did.
I liked the problem and that the MC didn’t develop much and the author was getting lost writing something after he forgot about it, that’s why he gave up but I think the story would be very good if he did it right
the story had alot of mistakes, and it was hard to read sometimes, but the overall plot was interesting and the character was awesome, good representation of the main MCU characters and alot of potential story here, but my main problem is you put the story on [complete] instead of [dropped] and I don't like the crude labeling which made me start reading this story in the first place
enjoyable short story, with some misspelled words, but nothing that makes it unreadable. Nice if you want to check out authors writing style. sadly it's dropped, so you leave blueballed at the end...
Tbh this was the best story of your i have Read and the new one wasnt even close to it. Sed you left this. Well i am still reading you new story and waiting for good part to come.
I'm sad you're rewriting it was great. But the curse of all twelve olympians won't make sense in marvel because Athena, Aphrodite, Poseidon and Hades don't seem like they'll do something like that. If your rewriting you don't need to give him a system maybe just the grimoire with the weapons in it and have him discover his powers .And you can use 616 ultron and have him be a lurker on the Internet while Tony is creating a new ai
This was the greatest mess of a story I have ever read and I don't know why I like it. I hope the author rewrites it. Unfortunately the MCU was always a mess and adding DC does not help.
It is a great novel, and the characters were great. But why did you drop it... The story could have gone from so much longer because contains both The Avengers time line and the X-Men time line adding some awesome characters, powers and events.
Reveal Spoiler It's really a great novel with a good development and introducing characters and the heroine in a great way. But sadly it's dropped 😭😭😭😭
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Reveal Spoiler great thanks so much for your time and consideration and I will be in the future of our games are based on the other day and I will be in the future of.
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Me gusto mucho la historia pero creo que le falta mas variedad en situaciones [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] consteto de situasiones mas emocionales como lucha o muertes mas informacion de ciertas cosas
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I have enjoyed it so far. Thank you for your effort. Thank you Thank you Thank you Tank you Ttank yiu I wish I could write what I wanted to say.
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Well, this is the best marvel fanfic ever. Prove me wrong. I just hope there is a lot of chapters. And, MC to be OP. Well, Bela should be on good side. Odin should die. Zeus should be electrocuted. Posido should be drowned in sea, Hades should be banished to underworld .....