Prime Sovereign’s Shadow

LV 5

Teekumi

Hey everybody. Before anybody question it. Yes, this is similar from Shadow Hack, or at least the system. I wrote it because I think it will be fun and easy to write.

LV 5

Knam

The starting was quite abrupt ,should have been a little more detailed.......writing quality is decently expressive....can't say much in initial stages...........have great expectations from the story

LV 10

TheHappyForEvil

Buenos Dias! , bueno el protagonista tiene un propósito eso es bueno creo.... , se parece a shadow hack por el sistema pero tiene un defecto que sufre lo que vivio la sombra eso es justo, creo yo no hay que decir mucho sobre la novela solo tiene 2C....

LV 15

DeJeL

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You leave much to be desired for the start of this story, I feel the need for a little more backstory (maybe add it later as a sort of flashback?). Also, what is the normal cultivational method that most use, and how does that compare to what he's now using? Such questions I feel should be answered earlier rather than later.;,;. Positive Feedback: I only saw one thing I would see as an error in your writing quality, and I like the idea you created, ****** and straightforward.;,;. Personal Feedback: I did think it was an interesting book, but just not one I really want to read, so... sorry, I'm stopping here.;,;. Keep up the good work, and finish what you start please.;,;.