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Just first chapter is enough for every proper reader with a little bit of respect to logic for understanding that we've got a chinese mob here. Naruto based on journey to west, rikudo used star energy to get his powers....each of his conclusions makes me think even less about chinese people (not a racist but if a nation calls themselves blessed ones and still uses death penalty, then there's not a bit of respect for such....)
Undeserved reviews, most 5 stars are put by bots, and so the novel deserves 3.5 stars, but because of the bots I will put 1 star ..................
1 motivo para NÃO LER: Sistema. Sinceramente, a falta de criatividade é tanta que os autores simplesmente colocam 'sistema' para desenvolver sua história. Patético e sem criatividade. [img=faceslap]
One word, 'BOLD'. This author did something unexpected and it seems pretty okay to me 15 chapters in and I feel whole and complete: it's such a wonderful feeling, keep up the food work creator.👌🏽❤️
1 From the very beginning there was nonsense why he decided to be born together with Naruto for what ? to be Naruto 's dog ? but it 's okay 2 why did he decide to run to Konoha to ask for asylum ? he has a map of the world, he could choose security until he becomes strong, but not at the age of 4, he ran to konoha sorry, but I would pee myself out of fear with the power of chunin to go to konoha and be a rare pedigree cool what's here))) 3 the most disgusting thing is that a dragon appeared, I threw on this fairy tale in short, the slope of the beginning was 8, but then lower and lower, and in general I did not see his training
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wow look at all these bots, this novel is a solid 2/5 but all the bots you have giving you 5 stars is a big tell that your novel is a dumpster fire. MC is apparently Budda and gives everything away to the village and people around him. Just stupid honestly
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Read till chap. 143. this honestly is trash. started off well but at this point there is barely anything resembling Naruto. like why the **** is there ki? How is that related tk Naruto whatsoever. aside from a few characters and chakra, there is no resemblance to Naruto. and what was the point of killing Karin just to bring her back?
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Hey man I really like what you have done with this fan fiction so far I can't wait until you can start again. I also like how you are incorporating different stories into one another.
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Good.... 😂😢😂😮😴👋😍😢😉😭😂😉💗😭😷😂👊😂😢👊👊😉💕👋👋😧🎊🎉🎂😉😂😍〰💖😂😄😖😊☺😁❤💙😐😑😨😷😮😭😴💗🎉🎊😧😄😍💖💕👋😢〰🎂👊😉😍.................................
The author really knows his Naruto and has great ideas for the story but the writing style is very jarring. Would recommend purely for the ideas.
It's an ok story that doesn't really appeal to me and is kinda all over the place, I like the story and the english definitely isn't the worst but I wouldn't recommend it... however I wouldn't steer anyone away from it either
I loved this story it was so unique and diverse that it is sad that the author left it. Btw is this man dead cuz he hasn’t created anything in a long time. Maybe if this gets enough comments and likes he will continue the story??????!
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mah its a decent story but i would put this in low level compared to the pther stories i read. My main problem with this is that the characterization of the side characters around the MC, its seem to me they are designed just to accept everything the MC do with no question on how, why, and what. overall you can still read this story its not really that bad but if your used to reading high quality fanfic and novel dont bothered reading this.
I love it but there were a lot of chapters about useless characters that i didn't read, and at the end the story became realy hard to follow
The best naruto fan-fic i have read for now and i think you should give it a shot to. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Huh why are you coming downn here i dont have anything more to say. So bye 😁
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Very good novel, it was a fun read but mostly I like the story development & world development. You see most web novelist doesn't tend toward world development they decide to use Harem as main source of plot in their novel but in this novel it would be opposite of those and I like it. Keep up the good work ✌️
Excelente história, apesar que com o tempo mais conteúdo fora do Canon é acrescentado,mas tudo bem,fico triste que existam tantas pessoas frustada por um personagem que é poderoso e pode ajuda os outros treinando pessoas ou doando técnicas elas,eu simplesmente não entendo,ele não é prejudicado,o nível de poder de seu mundo e seu povo aumentado,seu karma é aumentado,qual o problema de um personagem ser simplesmente bom quando é capaz de ser bom , o povo falta beija os pés de personagens manipuladores, enganadores, implacável a nível de demônios,sem emoções etc o mundo é uma merda e o povo que até nas histórias fantasiosas seja uma merda também,mas enfim,esse autor é ótimo para as histórias de fanfic e espero que esteja bem e um dia retorne,se eu tivesse trabalho e uma boa grana com certeza pagaria ele só para terminar suas histórias.
Just first chapter is enough for every proper reader with a little bit of respect to logic for understanding that we've got a chinese mob here. Naruto based on journey to west, rikudo used star energy to get his powers....each of his conclusions makes me think even less about chinese people (not a racist but if a nation calls themselves blessed ones and still uses death penalty, then there's not a bit of respect for such....)
Undeserved reviews, most 5 stars are put by bots, and so the novel deserves 3.5 stars, but because of the bots I will put 1 star ..................
1 motivo para NÃO LER: Sistema. Sinceramente, a falta de criatividade é tanta que os autores simplesmente colocam 'sistema' para desenvolver sua história. Patético e sem criatividade. [img=faceslap]
One word, 'BOLD'. This author did something unexpected and it seems pretty okay to me 15 chapters in and I feel whole and complete: it's such a wonderful feeling, keep up the food work creator.👌🏽❤️
1 From the very beginning there was nonsense why he decided to be born together with Naruto for what ? to be Naruto 's dog ? but it 's okay 2 why did he decide to run to Konoha to ask for asylum ? he has a map of the world, he could choose security until he becomes strong, but not at the age of 4, he ran to konoha sorry, but I would pee myself out of fear with the power of chunin to go to konoha and be a rare pedigree cool what's here))) 3 the most disgusting thing is that a dragon appeared, I threw on this fairy tale in short, the slope of the beginning was 8, but then lower and lower, and in general I did not see his training
I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it
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Гг добрый помогает всем это просто ужасно это все равно как 2 Наруто и просто бесит такое поведение поэтому такая оценка🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕
Mc is naruto's dog 🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕💩💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕💩🐕🐕💩🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕💩💩🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕
wow look at all these bots, this novel is a solid 2/5 but all the bots you have giving you 5 stars is a big tell that your novel is a dumpster fire. MC is apparently Budda and gives everything away to the village and people around him. Just stupid honestly
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Read till chap. 143. this honestly is trash. started off well but at this point there is barely anything resembling Naruto. like why the **** is there ki? How is that related tk Naruto whatsoever. aside from a few characters and chakra, there is no resemblance to Naruto. and what was the point of killing Karin just to bring her back?
Reveal Spoiler Hey man I really like what you have done with this fan fiction so far I can't wait until you can start again. I also like how you are incorporating different stories into one another.
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I love this novel but I really need fast passes so................................................................................this is my review
Reveal Spoiler this is a novel that Is good that is that is that is that is..................................................... .......................... Remarkable
Reveal Spoiler Good.... 😂😢😂😮😴👋😍😢😉😭😂😉💗😭😷😂👊😂😢👊👊😉💕👋👋😧🎊🎉🎂😉😂😍〰💖😂😄😖😊☺😁❤💙😐😑😨😷😮😭😴💗🎉🎊😧😄😍💖💕👋😢〰🎂👊😉😍.................................
The author really knows his Naruto and has great ideas for the story but the writing style is very jarring. Would recommend purely for the ideas.
It's an ok story that doesn't really appeal to me and is kinda all over the place, I like the story and the english definitely isn't the worst but I wouldn't recommend it... however I wouldn't steer anyone away from it either
I loved this story it was so unique and diverse that it is sad that the author left it. Btw is this man dead cuz he hasn’t created anything in a long time. Maybe if this gets enough comments and likes he will continue the story??????!
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mah its a decent story but i would put this in low level compared to the pther stories i read. My main problem with this is that the characterization of the side characters around the MC, its seem to me they are designed just to accept everything the MC do with no question on how, why, and what. overall you can still read this story its not really that bad but if your used to reading high quality fanfic and novel dont bothered reading this.
I love it but there were a lot of chapters about useless characters that i didn't read, and at the end the story became realy hard to follow
The best naruto fan-fic i have read for now and i think you should give it a shot to. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Huh why are you coming downn here i dont have anything more to say. So bye 😁
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Very good novel, it was a fun read but mostly I like the story development & world development. You see most web novelist doesn't tend toward world development they decide to use Harem as main source of plot in their novel but in this novel it would be opposite of those and I like it. Keep up the good work ✌️
Excelente história, apesar que com o tempo mais conteúdo fora do Canon é acrescentado,mas tudo bem,fico triste que existam tantas pessoas frustada por um personagem que é poderoso e pode ajuda os outros treinando pessoas ou doando técnicas elas,eu simplesmente não entendo,ele não é prejudicado,o nível de poder de seu mundo e seu povo aumentado,seu karma é aumentado,qual o problema de um personagem ser simplesmente bom quando é capaz de ser bom , o povo falta beija os pés de personagens manipuladores, enganadores, implacável a nível de demônios,sem emoções etc o mundo é uma merda e o povo que até nas histórias fantasiosas seja uma merda também,mas enfim,esse autor é ótimo para as histórias de fanfic e espero que esteja bem e um dia retorne,se eu tivesse trabalho e uma boa grana com certeza pagaria ele só para terminar suas histórias.