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Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world

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Author: Gamma420

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After crash landing in what turns out to be a fantasy world, the orbital marine Dax will have to fight the powers that
occupy the world to reclaim the technology that got stranded along with him and eventually repair his crashed ship
to return to his own world.
On the way he discovers the rule breaking power of mana, a special particle that seems naive to the world he now
is a part of. Feeling seriously outgunned Dax places a priority on regaining his lost weaponry that is scattered
throughout the world, ranging in size and effectiveness from electromagnetically powered assault rifles,
powered exoskeletons and autonomous drones from the size of a spying UAV to heavy assault ships.
But the marine is not alone in his search those weapons, the powers of the world he now finds himself a part of is
quickly realizing that something outside their realm of understanding has graced the planet and that those artefacts
trapped inside large floating black sphere’s hold vast strategic value. Dax is then faced with a complex problem,
he must secure the technology that he needs to leave while at the same time make sure the tools of war from his world is not misused at the cost of being made a target by powers he fails to fully understand.

On his way Dax will have run ins with various powers, some of them hostile, some of them a bit more amenable to persuasion and mutual cooperation. After all, what is a knight, king, angel, demon or grand wizard to a railgun or even a tactical class high energy laser in orbit?

They’re soft targets.


For the record, English is not my first language, so there might be some spelling/grammar mistakes here and there. I’ve been getting better at writing over the last year or so, and have plans to go back and edit my old chapters, but it’s really hard to find the time.

Also, check out my discord server if anyone of you wants to trash talk me with a faster response time~

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    Dreamheart_Dragon

    Wonderfully written story with a well developed and well thought out main character. He is Ruthless when necessary without being psychotic or needlessly cruel like most ******* authors make their character, and can also be kind as well. A character with true depth.

    4yr
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    Uncle_Sheogorath

    I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,

    4yr
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    Sarn
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    OK - first let me start by saying that I love sci-fi novels (and that I think this novel is a gem, and deserves more credit than it's getting). I also happen to love fantasy novels. But what I really, really love are novels that manage to blend these two genres together creating an entertaining, well-written, action-packed, science <3's magic, totally amazing story. And that, my friends, is exactly what this author puts out. The characters are interesting, little to no grammatical errors, not to mention a sometimes hilarious, sometimes action/gritty, holistically amusing story-line! And as a bonus feature, the author seems to have a background in science and combat?? Regardless, the author sprinkles cool sounding combat and science-techno jargon throughout the story; while I'm not sure any of it's correct, it sounds frickin' awesome. Keep the good work, dear author, and I'll keep reading!

    4yr
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    ReihsRahl

    This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about! In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow. All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.

    4yr
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    _Alucard_

    This story should keep up because its freaking hyping me in my mind it was like Fantasy vs Advance tech, Angels vs Cyborgs. ahhhh this gives me nostalgia.

    5yr
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    Steven_Beck

    These chapters keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and maybe a sequel

    4yr
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    PortgasAce

    The story is really unique and attention grabbing. It started of pretty good and from then it just spiraled down hill. The author started by switching up the MC persona to some Isekai BSed that was really throwing me off considering our MC is a harden soldier was in charge of annihilating planets 🪐 and solar systems. It just didn’t fit...the image. Overkill of information that was really unnecessary to the story. EVERY female in this story is just a copy and paste like they are either meek or a loud mouth that just add on to the fillers. Story had a great potential and the author simply failed in the delivery. If you can stomach the typical tropes , isekai , female lead you’ll soon forget the name of in need of saving then by all means go for it!

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    Verstehen

    I was pretty confused with the dialogues of some characters in this novel. This novel has full potential, if the author has someone to proofread his works and help him make the story easy to read. Also there are some aspects in the MC that is lacking, like he is a soldier but the aura he gives off in the first chapters is more like an Isekai MC which he is not. The story could have been perfect if the MC has atleast someone survived with the ship. But still it has a Unique concept 0_0

    3yr
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    Nitpicker_Saint_42

    I love stories like this. I love transhumanism and futurism and this story gives a lot of it. The characters are fairly good, if sometimes inconsistent. The story itself was very promising in the beginning, but lately I’ve been feeling that the author has been nerfing and intentionally retarding the story for the sake of aimlessly running around in circles with redundant storylines...hell sometimes I fell that Dax is becoming a secondary character at this rate. Also I feel conflicted with the cover art, I always imagined Dax as more...’inhuman’, I don’t hate it, but my Dax was always somewhat of a blend of a Turian from Mass Effect and a Human-ish figures - kinda like a fleshier turian, with digitigrade legs and all. Also the Empire seems to be using very technologically disparate equipment, they posses nanotech that’s on the level of flipping magic and can’t get widespread DEWs and relativistic KKVs up and running by using that nanotech.

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    hidden_clouds

    Ok let's start by say that this book is a epic read. HANDS DOWN. You need to read this novel. The author has given us an idea of what would happen if master chief from the halo games crash landed on a dungeon and dragons world. And the impact that he has as he goes about survival. Between the hurmous interactions between a born and bred war machine and the world.. You need to read this and beg the author for more'

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    Vatgrak

    My opinion based my current progress (ch 36). Story has really good potential. Characters seem interesting, the same can be said about world setting. Unfortunately there is one huge minus to this story - number of mistakes in chapters is really high. It's understandable to make them but so far it looks like chapters are not checked even oncebefore publication.

    4yr
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    Frozenfang07

    This is shaping up to be a very good novel, just need more chapters. I love this genre of novels especially, there is just not enough novels that combine sci-fi, magic, fantasy, and star travel.

    5yr
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    hectorius

    Probably one of the only sci-fi stories that are truly good in this site. I'm can wait to see how the sequel develops. I hope the author stays true to his words and delivers it to us.

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    Dragonlord007

    Just loving this novel so far alot of nice stuff and great detail,.................................... . . . . . . . . . . ..........................................................

    5yr
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    MonteDT
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    So this gives a war hammer 40,000 type feel and I love it, a nice gritty character development, Co stars have logical development. On chap 50 but I'm engaged, and invested. Sad to see its completed at about 340 chaps, but still sharing up to be worth the read😁.

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    Zjiro
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    MrAsredt

    Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through. What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think. All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it! **: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T

    3yr
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    hadezs7
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    Honestly I love the story line as it brings something fresh to these types of novels. The characters are entertaining with how they react to each other and reading it only leaves me wanting more. If you like a military style mix of magic and tech this is a good read.

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    ABOTANI

    This book really need the light. It has good storyline. reasonable plot and character thinking level. the world building is also very good. Hope AUTHOR does not drop it..

    4yr
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    Steven_Beck

    This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and please write a sequel to this book

    4yr
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