Grand Fantasia World

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GspoT1

I think this will be a good novel. Good start. Not the best stary but its good for me and yeah, i think this will be a fun and its very interesting novel. Work hard. Good job author.

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GspoT1

Hey bro? I think you need to put damage output and like the hp of the rabbit like that? Thanks for the updates and i hope you consider suggestions. Thanks a lot.

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stevenzzz13

I think the beginning of the story it's decent The writing are somewhat lacking but it's not that bad The storyline is good, the joke are somewhat funny, i think the story will become better each chapter Keep up your work author

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Adolfo13

Allright i'am not gonna lie to myself altough my grammar it's not that good but i think it's still readable update at least 10 chapter a week story development slightly slow paced but it's gonna fun after 10+ chapter character design it's okay world background it's also okay i think