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What will happen when our hero and heroine meet? Well they will fall in love for sure but there's a lot more to come, the past uncovered, murder mysteries unsolved, on the run, the real villain revealed, hopes faded, dreams shattered, hearts broken, lives changed...
Will these opposite worlds stay together forever or move apart due to the differences between them?
Or will they destroy themselves in this...?
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Loved and enjoyed the story...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Well done author... Much love from me to you 😘😘😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘☺️☺️😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Guten Abend, First of all, why does your story have the fantasy tag? The people in your story go to college to study, use motorbikes to drive and guns to fight. The only, remotely, fantisy-ish element is that asia being a kingdom and even that sounds more like a different history rather than it being supernatural. Secondly, your chapters are too short, they appear to be summaries of the actual chapters, you are missing essential details to make your story more whole. At last but not least, the story is extremely fast-paced. In the first few chapters you get to know about the mc’s past but not the circumstances which led to the mc to become joining the secret agency or why her parents had to be killed. But, in the end, the story still is entertaining and if the author works on the points stated above, I’m sure, the story will become way better than it currently is.
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