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After Kendra Johnson lived her life under great difficulties she finally died and thought that was it.
But the fate made bet with her.
She awakened in the body of a weak child that was close to dying. Should she take a chance and live this life with full breath?
Even tho the body was weak, but the mind of the person that already lived a full life.
''I will make my wishes come true.''
''I will travel the world and explore the continents.''
''I can understand all the languages? Great with me I don't need a damn translator.''
''I need money so let's dive to the depths of the ocean and look for 1000 years old pearls.''
There is this man who can't let go.
There is the other who thinks he is important.
There are many birds and bees.
''But what I want is just travel around and one day find a quiet spot and enjoy my life.''
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This IS original.
NOT a translation.
I planned to give you chapters that are long but ended up short. Why? Because it is paid by word count and the long chapters became too expensive.
.Should I change it? let me know :)
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i really like your story ..this was amazing and the couple i love them both.....could you unlock this story completely???๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Good read. Different from the cliche novels you read out there. The only problem is the grammar and the words used. If you're a grammar nazi, you will probably not like this, but if you don't mind, then you can continue to read this.
I can feel your excitement and love of writing from this piece. This is from a teacher's point of view. I HIGHLY recommend that the author goes back and edits what has already been written to polish this piece. Omitted words, punctuation issues and garbled sentences may be hindering the readers from connecting with your story. I truly mean this review to be a suggestion that will help you improve your craft and not as a criticism.
i really really like this story. mc is really fair only punishment for those who deserve it. and second chance for other to see if they can be beter. story keeps moving in a steady place. and all characters have a good build and good reasons for doing the things they do.
Great storyline. Is this a book yet? When it is, I'll be in line to purchase. The storyline started as basic and the character kept expanding without becoming stagnant.
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I love this story. At first I was a little bored only because I was expecting magic straight away. But I kept reading and got really into the story. I do sometimes forget other characte names and then when they come up Iโm like, oh! Itโs that person! But overall, this is is a really really great story. The world background is amazing, the multiple realms and different worldsโฆ The relationship between the characters are very relatable. Also Kendraโs personality is another thing I love. She has an upright personality but isnโt like those other characters who immediately forgive someone who does wrong and she does kill people, but only those who deserve to be killed. And how she erases the persons soul as a form of kindness. Overall, an amazing story.โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
At first, the story is boring that's also the reason why I skip some chapters. But I decided to give this story a chance since it's just the beginning of the story. I never know, it might get good as long as I read some other chapters. And well, I'm right. It does get interesting as the story moved forward. But not enough to get me hook. But still, it's good
Dear author, I'm currently finding the story to be very interesting, hence I was wondering if you'd be interested if I did some correction? (by that I mean simply spelling, grammar and such) It's such a good story, in my point of view, that it would be sad if people stopped reading simply because of that. I'd be interested in doing that in my free time. That'd be a nice little project for me.
This novel is so good. A person with an old experience was reincarnated in a poor girl. A child with a mind of an ***** is really cute and dependable.
After living a life hard work and regret Miss Kendra Johnson has grown up in an orphanage but because she was smart, she managed to climb to the top through hard work and she back a billionaire in her previous life but with regrets because she didn't get time make friends and create also family yet old age had caught up with her and she wished if only she did have a second chance, she would live life differently. Upon her death a chance caught up with her as she woke up in a body of a 7 to 8 year girl in an unknown era.
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Considering that the author is not a native English speaker the novel is amazing. At first, it is simple and cute but with time the Daoist that is contained in all of us developed. Author, please continue with this story for a long, long time, please.
Rather good storyline. I guess writer has difficulties with English grammar, but that is fine with me. I don't understand some people complaining. This story is literally different than common stories. The writer is just beginner, so to expect Lord of the Rings story, is kind of too much. I am at least grateful about new approach. Good work writer and have fun writing. Do not listen to haters, they are just jealous about their lack of imagination. So just keep dreaming and everything will be fine :)
It's a good story. Really. It's a little bit slow pace novel so can get a little bor sometimes. But i always return to the continue reading. So even if it starts getting a little bit boring, it still is worth staying in your library bc u will always come back. This is exactly why I recommend this novel. And u don't forget the story line so fast cause of it unique characters and story. Hope this is able to help u decide.
This book has many awesome characters that arenโt too over powered (at least not right now). Kendra (the MC) is a badass who is kind to those who are good and cruel to those who deserves it. It really is a slow but great read. However, the grammar is terrible (sorry author!), I donโt mean commas or punctuation (mine isnโt that great either haha) but as in misusing tenses and saying things like โ I and your mother,โ instead of โyour mother and I.โ It doesnโt affect the story greatly, but it does make the sentences seem strange and flow not quite right(also, this book has many misspelled words), so I would recommend that the author check his/her chapters before posting. Other that that, this book is ๐ฅ๐, itโs a good read!
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I actually like the idea for this story and I like to imagine that the direction it goes will be interesting. Though the sentence construction and grammar needs more work, I'm still enjoying reading this story. The story is actually unique and have a sense of adventure which I find very interesting, compared to other transmigration stories.
I know its kind of weird to make my own review abut I just wanted to say this is bit slow paced,slice of life and will have much of food and fluff.Even tho I am writing it myself,sometimes even I am wondering what will happen next. :) :) :)