Synopsis
Time cannot die
Time cannot be stopped
Time continued to flows
Forward
Forward
Yet it can turn its direction
Return
Return
Till your life has gone
Till the moment of your existence began
Till your soul has been created
And in that Time
You can meet the end of the beginning
And you will Realize Death only awaits you.
Whether you move forward or go backwards
Death is the Ending of Time
-Destiny
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It's a unique concept that is developed quite interestingly by the author. It's not your usual story and isn't that cliché. Very well inspired and good quality of writing. The only issue is that sometimes you can feel that the chapters are not reread due to small typos and long, drawn-out sentences. But these small mistakes can be easily fixed with an editor.
The work seems to be fine with me, but the story itself... I don't know maybe I was just naive but I really think you have a great future ahead of you. Keep on writing!
The story is good. At first I though it would be like the typical cliched isekai but thankfully it was not. The blurb is unique since it was in poetry form. There are some typos but they are tolerable. The concept is interesting which makes me anticipate the next chapters.
At first I thought it will be an isekai but it wasn't so that's a relief- anyway, there's some grammatical errors here and there and it just needed some little fixing so we're good. The plot is intriguing and I like the timers littered around as well as the mystery of the phenomenon that is happening with the MC. Kinda fell flat with the girl friend tho but that's just from my taste, I guess? Also feels a lot like a big introspection but the way the MC interacts with his surroundings definitely saved it. Kinda feel for him in the latest tho (yea those zigzags will also be the death of me) also, Dyne is cute- that is unarguably true xD
Well till now I liked the story! Just a little bit grammatical errors are there which can be rectified after editing thoroughly! I wish author all the best in this new journey! Keep it up dear! Will be waiting for more updates!
Your book was magnificent although the beginning was cliche I adored how captivating the book was. The plot was captivating and it kept me needing to read more! Keep updating, I can't wait to read more major.
This book is top-notch seeing how the Author expressed the ideas and started to create a wonderful plot. Which resulted to being one of the worthy bookd to be read by the readers. Kudos to the Author.
Your book was great although the beginning was cliche I loved how captivating the book was. The plot was captivating and it kept me wanting to read more! Keep updating, I can't wait to read more. -ClumsyPanda
Your book was great I liked the way you explain your story and it was really captivating. Keep updating and there is no wonder that your book is getting better chapter by chapter!
The work is quite interesing if you think of it, I made a litle plot diagram of it and it matches. One thing about writing that is very much needed is to match up with your story. It helps bring your story into life in a way. I read many books that were really good which matched. One thing though, you can use other words to really describe the story, that'll really help.
I don't know what will happen as the story is in the early phase but what I can say is... The story was interesting, the mystery of facing death has a unique charm. Looking forward to the other chapters.
So far this work is really interesting. There's a lot of mystery and suspense with a plot that's shaping up to be intriguing. I'd also like to applaud the use of punctuation to build up tension.
An interesting novel, I like how the story is progressing so well till no though it's just seven chapters. The author is decorating the plot nicely and I like how he/she is doing this.
The work these characters revolve around the mind of the author is really ecstatic! Although the title seems a little bit cliche to me, the plotline of it makes it unique for the readers! Great job!