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Zain is transported to different worlds his goal separate the ML from the Heroine. He didn't expect that a specific soul followed him to each world and he would slowly fall in love.
This book has bxb bl yaoi!
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Got to say, this book is really better then I original thought. No offence to the author. This book is hilarious and I just love how black-belly the MC is!
Overall it has a really good story line. Would like to see more update stability, and also the improvement of the writing of the chapters. Except for these two things I really love the concept and the characters, it is so far my favorite novel...
This is a nice story so I thanks author for sharing this story to us hope that author would update soon pllllllllssssss🙏🙏🙏btw I love this kind of plot❤️❤️❤️
nothing can explain how much I love this book it is a genuine work of art I love it soooooo much author you are really doing an amazing job keep up the great work❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
l like it very much and at the beginning i don't really want to read, because of the cover. like i don't like to judge but for some reason when i saw the cover for this novel it made me like 'i don't want to read this~'. but i force myself to read before i judge this novel. the cover is ok, but made me feel the depressed. i know that drawing is hard but idk, i never felt like that before so.┐(´ー｀)┌ will, i'm glad i force myself to read this because it's a good novel, so keep going~( ´∀｀)b
The characters and world design are very interesting and fun to read. I love reading the fake white lotus being exposed and just BL transmigration novels in general! Some of the villains are a bit shallow and the story is fast-paced, but I honestly prefer it that way over the long convoluted arcs that last more than 30 chapters. The only thing I would really comment on is perhaps getting a beta reader or an app/website like Grammarly to help with the writing. Every paragraph is like an extremely long run-on sentence with no end and just the help of some commas and punctuation would really up the quality of the novel and make the story itself more legible. Other than that, fun story!
Love the story so far and looking forward to see what you do with the story! Hope you update soon! I love how the story is present and the romance is built up. The background stories are great and you give your characters personalities that areunique! Keep up with the great work!
Wow wow wow!!! Why did it take so long for me to find this jewel of a story. Really enjoying it so far can't wait for the next couple chapters.
it is amazing .well written bravo hope for more stories like this were the MC doesn't depend on the system they are given..............................................................................................................................................................................................
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Author God! You forgot the Quick transmigration tag! I have been hunting Qt and didn’t find this one till now because the tag was missing ah- But other than that keep up the great work!! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
As of now the story is progressing well and It’s done to satisfaction. The plot may be like any other system transmigration stories, but I quite like it. ✨
I really love it. And i am waiting, hoping for more exciting chapters. I really love main characters porsonallity and how the male lead is always appearing next to him, and supports him.
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I like this book very much, though the updates are really longer you know. But its alright I can manage.😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
The story is good though I'm craving for something that this story missed. And I also want to say th the writer should put punctuation mars, specifically commas, because sometimes I can't catch the line.
oml i love this so much!!!!😫💗💗 it’s soooooooo freaking good i love the characters and the sticky soul that follows the mc!! this is so good!!!🤩💗😫💕
A pretty nice story. Something that can give you a good laugh over and the plot flows nicely. A strong MC against a power hungry woman, who practically digs her own grave... It's nice see her been put back in her place!
I love your story in how his lover soul clings to him in meets him every time ........................................................................