/ Urban / Prototype JULAUG 2020
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Good for me. I hope it could updated quickly. Are you doing world update everytime you post? That would be good because it will expose the background time by time. However, just do it quickly only. Nothing more than it.
Overall, I give 4.4 ratings. It has a good grammar application and mostly many words substitution from thesaurus. Right after the second volume started, it became very stable in term of updating. Nevertheless, the characters description still stuck at name and not fully their appearance. And does so for the world background, it still seems very little.
In term of stability, it deserves a four star. I just like that the writer use the same word every time but changed the order of those words appear and it's kinda funny. How to threw your eyes as your way of looking at something? There's a point I like : Norbert and Fransisca created a chat group at Line, but it hadn't used yet. But it seemed that Leonard is going to plan something with the union.
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I changed my mind about the story. It get bettet, even though it lifetime is only a week, or less? 🤣🤣 How if there are another administers? I really want to know about the class members.