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She did get love for a lifetime but not a lover for lifetime.
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The story is too emotional. I liked the way you have described her thoughts. I am giving it 5stars!! I liked it alot. In one chapter the author described their love quite nicely. Eight years in love and was finally going to get married. But then the sudden tragedy. The author described the nature of both too. The girl was fun-loving and a little childish or perhaps every girl act like a child in front if her lover. And the boy was a responsible person. He was too much in love with her. He loved her as much that he didn't care for himself and saved her. True Love!!! But the girl was too shocked and was in trauma during his last journey and regretted too when came out of the trauma. A person might feel in such a way that the author portrayed, after a great lost. Good Work!! Keep it up!!
I'm giving this 5 stars. because not only is it good but in the place, i am in my life it made me shed a tear. I genuinely love it. in one chapter you inspire emotion it's really well done in my opinion. if i could give more stars id be happy to. I should take notes on the emotions portrayed here
This story was emotional, interesting and original. I liked the part where the girl recounted how the one she intended to marry was more excited than her about their engagement and marriage. I also liked that the girl's feelings were described in great detail. I think the title is meant to be 'supposed' instead of 'suppose'. Good job😊
OwO This was similar to my own one shot in some ways. Sad: ✅ Depressing: ✅ Angst: definitely ✅ Uncertain ending: Yeah, I'm not so sure about that. She said she'll reunite with him. So will she die too? Will she wait till rebirth? Is this a cliffhanger that author left for us? Writing quality: Definitely a five. It was simple, fluent, yet descriptive. Stability of updating: It's a nonsense parameter for original authors anyways. Story development: Keeping in mind that this is a one shot, I can tell that the story was proceeding smoothly. The words didn't jump over one another and kept the process languid. Character design: Yeah, the mc is a depressed person. Obviously, she just caused her lover's death... World background: Not much has been mentioned but I can understand you won't be able to write much about it in a one shot. Still, I gave this a four star. Overall:4.8 It was satisfying enough to read. ♥ ♥ ♥
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It is a book different from others!! It is in a diary form which is unique. But I guess the book isn't complete. I'd like read the whole story. Hope the author will continue the book.
I am giving it five stars....................... because I just loved it.!!!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ I got a little late to give a review for it's one chapter version 😅 This story was initially a one chapter story and it conveyed the feelings quite well. I was moved by the story. It is too emotional. I felt sad for the main lead. I also liked that it is in diary format. .❤ Now the author announced that she will write more in this story... Although don't know what it will be but waiting for further chapters. 😍 Waiting Waiting and Waiting.!!!!!!