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[Shelter System successfully bound to host!]
[Option One: City of Light, save the survivors in the apocalypse and become a glorious and benevolent savior.]
[Option Two: City of Darkness, humans who enter the City of Darkness can only become your slaves. And you, will be the devil ruling over the apocalypse.]
Sorry, I am no saint, I choose City of Darkness! From today onwards, I will be a villain!
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Write a reviewLet me summarize the first 16 or so chapters. he gets an OP system that is very vague and is acquired in the first chapter. THEN he rapes 3 girls following that.
Reveal SpoilerI like this is there any more like were MC makes a city in a apocalypse and only women are allowed in that are his harem and has lots of seggs
It's evident from the outset that the author lacks survival skills, evident in the constant errors made to fulfill power fantasies. The only consistent element is the dedication to the author's fetishes, which seem disconnected from real-life experiences. The erotica is notably poor, particularly due to the absence of consensual encounters on top of the recurring theme of deflowering women. The dialogue lacks realism, suggesting a disregard for female agency while simultaneously reflecting the author's fragile ego. While certain aspects of the content may appeal to some, the author's fixation on personal fantasies neglects the reader's enjoyment. Despite potential perceptions of the author as cultured or myself as weak-minded, the reality is far from it. As a war veteran from a prestigious military unit, I've experienced diverse situations, but this narrative lacks realism and adventure, offering little appeal. Ultimately, this is subpar erotica and a poorly crafted fantasy, likely conceived by an immature individual lacking the talent to create compelling narratives. Regarding recommendations, "Debauchery of the Village Chief" offers degeneracy within a story, while "The First Hunter" provides a compelling apocalyptic survival narrative. Both are preferable alternatives to the presented content, which lacks authenticity and quality.
As a Fellow New Author, I will support this book by giving it all 5 stars. So far the story is so good. Though the 18+ parts are a bit short and not too detailed 😅
Reveal SpoilerThe main character is black, if you like this kind of degenerate novels go for it, it's not my case at least. Besides, interracial relationships are unpleasant, even if it is with Asians or blacks.
99% is a copy of a Chinese novel that I read about 2 years ago, but I don't remember the name, if you are copying, at least remove the Chinese name.
Would've been more interesting if the names hadn't changed every so often from English to Chinese like a badly translated novel
this is the cringiest protagonist I've ever read. I'm not sure about effective creation of an evil character but this is not it. it started off like Uncle p*RN and did not even have the courtesy of being a good shelter genre novel.
Reveal SpoilerDoes anyone know a novel like I, The Son of Luck's Father is the Hidden Villain of the Book? Introduce me too.
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Anyway, I'll leave it here, thanks to the brave man who read the novel and gave us this information. If you liked what the author did in this novel, then you can't call yourself a man. Unfortunately, the author does not seem to be able to respond to comments, I would like to know what problems with his head made him write this in his novel.
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