This is constructive criticism only. The writung quality is just an ok since you dont start dialogue with capital letters and regular stuff like that but it might be your first time writing. Plus the timeskip training is pretty weird since it’s his first time in this world you shouldve showed his training seeing that he went from regular human strength to jumping off ships unharmed. These are my only complaints and in the future training i hope you kinda write about it even a little bit. I will continue to read i have high expectations for you no pressure
This is constructive criticism only. The writung quality is just an ok since you dont start dialogue with capital letters and regular stuff like that but it might be your first time writing. Plus the timeskip training is pretty weird since it’s his first time in this world you shouldve showed his training seeing that he went from regular human strength to jumping off ships unharmed. These are my only complaints and in the future training i hope you kinda write about it even a little bit. I will continue to read i have high expectations for you no pressure