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Follow the MC on his journey through this world where might is right as he tries to find out its secrets and live a full life
Don't judge the novel with the first chapter only, I am a first-time writer and my first couple of chapters made a lot of people drop, but if you continue reading and see a plot hole please comment and I'll fix it.
This is not cultivation, it'll be explained in the later chapters.
MC is younger than Itachi by 8 months meaning different school year.
-OC MC
-No harem
-I'll try yo do romance but I'm pretty bad at it
The cover is not mine.
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Story is aite and has potential All I'm hoping for is for the story to keep going this way and not nerf him to keep the story's canon events from happening like other novels Also, he better make his own moves instead of just stealing the Raiton: Kirin and Lightning Blade cus that just makes him a second-rate copycat
The story is good so far(chap. 16) the mc is a hard worker. He is training for to gain power unlike some fanfic where the mc gain power whith out quite easily. The mc is still innocent but that because he's yet to experience the life of a shinobi outside of the village.
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personally for me characters development matters a lot i don't care about the story all i want is an good characters development, and all this is perfect in this fan-fic author is doing great, till now there is not much story development except for some minor changes which can do some major differences in story ahead.
Awesome concept, love seeing more of the Uchiha without MC becoming one of the main cast :D fights are good, like you say a bit of romance would be nice later but for now MC is going strong with his jutsu-wutsu training.
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Ok but I can't stand this novel the way he gained his sharingan especially with the cultivation elements to it and not trying to say your novel is bad or anything but it is really bad and seriously doesn't deserve the high rating it has
Great novel and insane character development the smooth changes in cannon to fit the story and the improvements made to the mistakes of the original owner are visible even this early in the story absolutely love this book and really hope it's not discontinued as it has everything to be a full book and even beyond that 4.8 stars out of 5 with the 0.2 being the fact it might be discontinued already
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Overall I genuinely enjoy this novel I dont think being not picky is fair to the author who has put in so much effort especially when there are so many parts I like Thank you for your efforts
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If author can write this story correctly and with lots of updates..... This sure will be a huge hit.... I also hope MC can use technique like the Raikage as it will suit him the best....... Please save the UCHIHAS.... Like let Itachi kill the old foggies but let the young ones alive......
I was trying to keep reading but I can't. This fanfiction has been done without much thought, many mistakes like. 1-The way that the sharingan awoke is wrong, he never knew the Father, he has no emotional attachment and just because the Mother told him the story of his possible death he suddenly has enough anguish to awaken the sharingan. 2-How they got back to konoha the way they got this VERY WRONG, FOR GOD'S LOVE, KONOHA IS A SHINOBI VILLAGE AND THEY ARE PARANOIC THE FIRST THING THAT HAPPENS IS THAT THEY MUST BE TAKEN TO THE HOKAGE FOR INTERROGATORY, EVEN MORE AFTER DEATH DO FOURTH HOKAGE. 3- The return to the Uchiha is disappointing, the MC took the name of the father not Uchiha automatically the elders of the clan would take their eyes and exchange for normal ones, even if they are cousins of the patriarch of the clan that does not change. 3.1- If Mc had adopted the name Uchiha he and his mother would be isolated from the Uchihas like Izumi and his Mother Now where I couldn't take it and droped chapter 13. 4-One of the biggest mistakes JARAYA WASN'T IN KONOHA SINCE HE learned of MINATO'S DEATH, UNTIL NARUTO CHUNNINS EXAMS WHERE THE THIRD HOKAGE CALLED HIM BECAUSE OF ORICHIMARU'S MOVEMENTS. 4.1-And if he were in konoha he would not be looking for a new disciple while his godson is undergoing horrible treatments, to have to take care of an uchiha brat, in which the clan are suspected of killing his disciple. To say. I liked the premise of the story but the author has no knowledge of the world and the characters to better develop his story, the characters they look like machines there’s no feeling they don’t have personality but I don’t care, I was just frustrated by that 4 points.
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